Submitted: July 30, 2010
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So as I read this I think to myself "Dammit, why isn't this a novel?". That would be encouragement to make it a novel, then again you are the author. I really enjoyed the way the plot flowed and such and please update me if you decide to continue this.
~ Silver
i agree with lucky me1133 this SHOULD be a novel!!!
Mon, August 2nd, 2010 11:27amWell at first I was kind of lost, but then I could connect some pieces. I agree with the former comments that suggest that this should be a novel, you could connect more the characters and events and things and it would be less mmm confusing? But I liked it, even though I was lost I kept reading to try to identify more the characters.
If you write a novel let me know and update me of course :)
I didn't find it all that confusing! I've read WAY more confusing stories! I liked it and now I'm off to read your other stories :) Oh and I think it's better as a short story cause it breaks it up more and gives the reader the choice to either read the rest, or stop here because you gave it a good ending :)
-A:)
While your readers hunger for more, some stories just stand alone well as flash fiction. I wrote Two Sexual Predators Prey and the readers pestered me into writing something longer, which I did. Predators was my exercise in building a climatic scene, which I think I accomplished. Please read it and comment. I think you have accomplished what you intended with Strife. P.S. I think you maturity is refreshing here on Booksie.
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luckyme1133
this should be a novel! It's listed as a short story though.... it's really good! If you continue it please keep me updated!
Sat, July 31st, 2010 9:44amAuthor
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Thank you very much! I have written a few different short stories with these characters, but haven't put em together as a novel. Maybe someday. Thanks for reading!
Sat, July 31st, 2010 3:24am