Clear to mists ; mists to clear, poem by atlantian

Clear to mists ; mists to clear

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Poem by: atlantian

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Status: Finished | Genre: Action and Adventure | House: Booksie Classic

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This tells the story of a pilot who disappears over the Bermuda triangle.

Submitted: May 17, 2011

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Submitted: May 17, 2011

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CLEAR TO MISTS; MISTS TO CLEAR

The plane’s systems lost its guide…
this place must have something to hide.

The place shorted out my landing gear…

---clear to mists; mists to clear---

I survived the crash; the mist now away; I now saw what Atlantis is…so I have to stay.

There was vehicles engaged in majestic flight…yet there was no propellers; engines; wings, in sight.

Yet, learning of this place gives a price so severe…

-------clear to mists; mists to clear----

I am now a citizen of an unknown land…to the rest of the world, my wife, my kids, I am gone like eroded sand.

I have now sent a warning out of Atlantis; for those who wish not to lose everything they hold dear…

------clear to mists; mists to clear----

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striver7777

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Tue, September 27th, 2011 5:48am

A great poem 8D

PiratePrincessSarah

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Tue, February 26th, 2013 12:46am

I WANNA GO TO ATLANTIS NOW!

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Wed, February 27th, 2013 5:27am

if i may ask, you would prefer a caged paradise over a world of oppurtunity? Like i stated in the poem, he has to send a "warning" out because those who stumble upon ATLANTIS become trapped FOREVER. BUT, thanks for the feedback!, if you're a fan of singing and hip-hop as well, i urge you to visit my youtube as well: www.youtube.com/swire123 ! PEACE