Did You Ever...

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Just how a always feel and i'm tired of it


Did you ever feel like someone was watching you?

I always feel that way.

Big Brother stalks you

Looking over your shoulder

Just waiting for you to fail

Did you ever feel like no one cares?

I always feel that way

The crowd pushes past you

Knocking you down because

You don’t matter to them

Did you ever feel like life has no meaning?

I always feel that way

The world is dark and dreary

Cruel, cold, and just


Did you ever feel like you wanted to die

I always feel that way

The knife dances by your neck

The gun wants to sing

You wish you had the strength

Did you ever feel like there was hope?

They always feel that way

So why can’t I

Just smile and laugh

Instead of wishing life away?

Submitted: November 25, 2009

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Deppressing... BUT GOOD!!! :)

Sat, November 28th, 2009 4:17am


thank you :)

Mon, November 30th, 2009 11:48am


i like how its well detailed...
even tho its depressing...
i like it...

Tue, December 8th, 2009 12:36am


thanx lotta ma stuff is depressing

Mon, December 7th, 2009 7:24pm

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