Sick of Her Whatevers

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sometimes u hurt and i get it but sometimes i hurt to is what you don't seem to get

I am

Floating in and out of "whatever’s."

Between the "nothings" and "never minds," there is a point.

Beyond the "I don’t cares."

Past the "leave me alones".

Transcending the bullshit.

Above the "you don’t love me’s."

Through the sarcastic "wow’s" and "I’ll leave you, you jerk."

I hear the words, "I’m afraid. I can’t do this anymore.

I can’t live a lie. I can’t resist

The temptations."

I can’t believe it will be this hard once we break down the

Monophobia

Philophobia

We see the future.

Let’s stop fooling ourselves.

The immediate future for us

Ain't us at all.


Submitted: October 22, 2009

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Maedai

Powerful. Great job

Sun, October 25th, 2009 1:03am

shewhowrites21

that was....deep. u could kinda hear the sadness under it.
that was a great piece. it realii shows ur feelings
Keep it up :)

Sun, November 29th, 2009 4:40pm

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thank i will :)

Sun, November 29th, 2009 7:38pm

laziibum119

I love this so much! it really shows how you feel. i actually teared up because something to me that i can relate to this. Its great :)

Mon, February 8th, 2010 9:56pm

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o wow thank you :D

Mon, February 8th, 2010 2:30pm

MissRemedyHate13

I have to agree with all three.
This is really deep and meaningful, fantastic poem.

Mon, March 1st, 2010 2:38am

HappyElf

I love how you worded this and I can almost sense the emotion. Well done :3

Fri, April 16th, 2010 6:45pm

lost in translation

I loved how you placed yourself around the emotions of a crumbling relationship. This was a great read. Keep it up.

Mon, April 26th, 2010 6:50pm

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