Sick of Her Whatevers

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sometimes u hurt and i get it but sometimes i hurt to is what you don't seem to get

I am

Floating in and out of "whatever’s."

Between the "nothings" and "never minds," there is a point.

Beyond the "I don’t cares."

Past the "leave me alones".

Transcending the bullshit.

Above the "you don’t love me’s."

Through the sarcastic "wow’s" and "I’ll leave you, you jerk."

I hear the words, "I’m afraid. I can’t do this anymore.

I can’t live a lie. I can’t resist

The temptations."

I can’t believe it will be this hard once we break down the



We see the future.

Let’s stop fooling ourselves.

The immediate future for us

Ain't us at all.

Submitted: October 22, 2009

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Powerful. Great job

Sun, October 25th, 2009 1:03am


that was....deep. u could kinda hear the sadness under it.
that was a great piece. it realii shows ur feelings
Keep it up :)

Sun, November 29th, 2009 4:40pm


thank i will :)

Sun, November 29th, 2009 7:38pm


I love this so much! it really shows how you feel. i actually teared up because something to me that i can relate to this. Its great :)

Mon, February 8th, 2010 9:56pm


o wow thank you :D

Mon, February 8th, 2010 2:30pm


I have to agree with all three.
This is really deep and meaningful, fantastic poem.

Mon, March 1st, 2010 2:38am


I love how you worded this and I can almost sense the emotion. Well done :3

Fri, April 16th, 2010 6:45pm

lost in translation

I loved how you placed yourself around the emotions of a crumbling relationship. This was a great read. Keep it up.

Mon, April 26th, 2010 6:50pm

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