The Creeper

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The Creeper knows...everything. Blink he's counts how many breathe, he measures how deep. Speak, he remembers every word you say...

Thunder clap

He stalks you

Coldly in the night

Sees you when you’re sleeping

Knows when you’re awake

Watching.

Every mood you make

Every step

Every breath

You take

He sees

He watches

Do you see what I see?

Creeping in the corner

Late nights

Violent masturbation

To that one photo

You posted on your

Web page

You thought it was private

Your diary

Your conversations with your

“Friends”

You thought it was private

The things you told your

Counselor

Priest

Parents

Yourself

You thought they were private

So he creeps

Naked through your front lawn

Down your chimney while your children sleep

Into your bed while you slumber

With your lover

Nothing is

Private

Nothing is

Hidden

Nothing is

Sacred

Nothing can be

Kept

Not from the

Creeper

Submitted: October 27, 2009

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carli17

Love this! :) it's well written and I like how you used the word "creeper" instead of stalker :P

Fri, October 30th, 2009 2:45am

Maedai

Oooo, intense. Great poem!

Fri, October 30th, 2009 12:32pm

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lol thanx

Fri, October 30th, 2009 9:02am

eragon96

weird... but good lolz

Thu, November 5th, 2009 2:27am

shewhowrites21

man, this is totally spooky. both are :D
i find it hard to pick favorites with you and your writing. they are all just epically amazing! :D

Tue, December 1st, 2009 4:29am

xOxOxFcukM3xOxOx

OOOHHH!!
SOOOO INTERREESSTIING!
I LOVVEE IITT!

Tue, December 8th, 2009 12:38am

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lol thanx...shud chek out da other parts

Mon, December 7th, 2009 7:23pm

xRCGx

Wow thats really weird and wicked in ways...
Love it! :D

Sat, March 27th, 2010 7:55am

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gracias :)

Mon, March 29th, 2010 7:50am

Zombie Bunny

I can't be the only one who was disturbingly reminded of Santa Claus, right? O.o "Sees you when you're sleeping, knows when you're awake", "Down your chimney while your children sleep", etc. Like a really creepy, stalker version. XD Maybe it's just me?

I love it, it's well written. It gave me goose bumps.