I was angry with the world. With everything that existed.

 Yo...

Who the fuck are you to decide my future.

Tell me where to live, what to do, who to see.

Who the fuck gave you the power to make MY decisions?

You don’t know what’s best for me.

You don’t know what’s best for you.

I ask for help, you rebuke me.

I slit my wrist, and scream into the night

You ignore me

So who the fuck are you to call yourself my father,

My mother

My brother

My sister

My friend

You don’t’ know who I am.

I don’t know who I am

Who the fuck made you God?

Who the fuck told you my every emotion?

Who the fuck are you to say I don’t love you?

Who the fuck are you to say that you

Give a shit

A flying fuck

A rats ass

You don’t

I don’t

So why the fuck am i still talking?

Why the fuck are you still alive

Still breathing my air

Walking in my space

How the fuck am I supposed to trust you

When I can’t trust myself?

Why the fuck is it all so wrong

It wasn’t supposed to end this way.

Why the fuck can’t I just

Be...


Submitted: October 22, 2009

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to lie on the floor without holding on

Well, I fucking loved this. It is angry and sad and true and really intense and I think you made a great point.

Thu, October 22nd, 2009 7:36pm

pads

sorry mate, doesn't do it for me. tiny bit cliche, and too much emphasis on the word 'fuck', come on fellar, they're are thousands of better words to use.

Thu, October 22nd, 2009 7:56pm

SparklingCloud

Wow I loved it. Personally I think the comment by pads was undeserved; emphasis on the word "fuck" is expected given the title. Furthermore, who doesn't overuse swearing when they are angry?
Regardless, this poem was epic; I just hope you felt better once you wrote it ;)
"Still breathing my air

Walking in my space" - I know how you feel

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 1:07pm

Maedai

Simple, clear, piercing, excellent. Great job

Sun, October 25th, 2009 1:01am

eragon96

i feel like that sometimes... anyways greaat job i never could have done that ;P

Thu, November 5th, 2009 2:39am

Inspiration

Have to say loved this poem felt your anger very powerful, very brave to be so honest I hope you have found a way besides poetry to channel your anger I have to tell you it takes a lot of soul searching been where you are just be that all you need love is nearer than you know.

Wed, December 2nd, 2009 4:30pm

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everything i write i try ta b honest in even if its a lil...much glad u enjoyed it

Wed, December 2nd, 2009 11:45am

Mistress of Word Play

What a way to vent. Nice job on the write. Seems they are paying attention. Susan :))

Thu, December 3rd, 2009 11:47pm

Don George

I'm certain that I commented on this one. No matter, I get what your aiming at here. I'm reminded of Sam Kinison, rest his soul, what a wonderful human.
injoy

Thu, January 7th, 2010 4:19am

Author
Reply

Honestly i thawt u did too.. but thanx for tha comment

Thu, January 7th, 2010 11:50am

Summer Forever

You told me to take a look at your two poems, and i did. This one speaks the truth. Intense as it is I still appreciate the message that you are trying to portray. Kudos.

Tue, February 16th, 2010 2:53am

Raevynn Blaque

Strong and intense. I like it

Thu, May 6th, 2010 6:42pm

ILoveGaara

I really like it, so intense - made me really angry and I love the word fuck, so it's an amazing piece of work that you have here xD

Sun, October 17th, 2010 2:45am

glitter snow426

so amazing stuff!! it's a heartfelt, tell it like it is special thrill!! You certainly did fantastic here, one deep, truthful, straight form your mind, heart work, love it, love it!!!! You should get many awesome comments, really!!

Tue, February 1st, 2011 9:54am

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