it's in your eyes,
cold and dark,
like a nightmare,
a breath away,
hold to this,
you won't like what follows,
spread the ashes,
crush the embers,
not a spark remains,
this can't continue,
go quietly now,
gently to your death,
let us speak no further my love,
your voice pains me so,
you are suffocating me,
with your hands around my trust.
Submitted: February 24, 2009
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Nice poem!
I like the tension in the lines and the darkly disturbing words.
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thank you.i find solace in writing it down
Tue, February 24th, 2009 7:20am
AWESOME POEM!! You did a GREAT job! If you have time could you check out some of my poems, like 'Pass Me By' or 'Windows With No Glass'?
Mon, March 2nd, 2009 5:11am
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thank you so much.i will definately stop by for a look.
Mon, March 2nd, 2009 12:40am
Yet another that brings back harsh memories of us...
I've noticed you haven't posted much lately. Maybe you should change that...
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just comment on the writing i have other places that you can leave comments about how you feel
Thu, July 8th, 2010 11:50amFacebook Comments
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Rolli
wow this is a very dark poem
Tue, February 24th, 2009 9:39ami like the last 2 lines
good write
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thank you.most of my writing is dark.i like it to be on the page as opposed to my mind.
Tue, February 24th, 2009 1:41am