screaming my silence

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is so...unfamiliar.

it's in your eyes,

cold and dark,

like a nightmare,

a breath away,

hold to this,

you won't like what follows,

spread the ashes,

crush the embers,

not a spark remains,

this can't continue,

go quietly now,

gently to your death,

let us speak no further my love,

your voice pains me so,

you are suffocating me,

with your hands around my trust.


Submitted: February 24, 2009

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Rolli

wow this is a very dark poem
i like the last 2 lines
good write

Tue, February 24th, 2009 9:39am

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thank you.most of my writing is dark.i like it to be on the page as opposed to my mind.

Tue, February 24th, 2009 1:41am

Sekan

Nice poem!
I like the tension in the lines and the darkly disturbing words.

Tue, February 24th, 2009 11:59am

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thank you.i find solace in writing it down

Tue, February 24th, 2009 7:20am

FancyJumper

AWESOME POEM!! You did a GREAT job! If you have time could you check out some of my poems, like 'Pass Me By' or 'Windows With No Glass'?

Mon, March 2nd, 2009 5:11am

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thank you so much.i will definately stop by for a look.

Mon, March 2nd, 2009 12:40am

Rekindled Love

Yet another that brings back harsh memories of us...

I've noticed you haven't posted much lately. Maybe you should change that...

Wed, July 7th, 2010 10:07pm

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just comment on the writing i have other places that you can leave comments about how you feel

Thu, July 8th, 2010 11:50am

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