Poem by: Ava Rosien
Submitted: January 28, 2013
Stumbled on a stupid brick;
hit my head with such force
now is making stomach sick.
Legs wobbly and off course;
Eyes see two; instead of one;
Turning black; guess I’m done!
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A funny quicky!
This is very funny as long as it didn't happen to you for real.
Not for real...lol Just a bit of silliness on my part.
Thanks for stopping in. :)
Oh dear Ava. Do you require a Medic or are you OK?!
I love it, it is quick and full of wit.
Thank you for posting, and mind those bricks! They have a mind of their own (shows scar on chin from a brick as Father laid the Patio Wall back in 1986)
MEDIIIIIIIIC!!!! I know you love hearing your named screamed. lol Glad you liked my little piece of silliness!
Your little bit of silliness made me smile. It was cute. Thanks
So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping in to read my work.:)
The funniest one sofar. Had a good laugh. Like your sense of humor.
Thank you Bert. :)
laying it on thick with the brick, if words were mortar you'd have a wall
lol Thanks dibs.
Quirky. Nice to get some light relief.
Thanks Rebel! :)
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