Nonsensical!

Nonsensical!

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So how can we go on, when your unrelenting still remains?

Submitted: July 19, 2011

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‘Nonsensical’

I notice this feeling,

Isn’t it corrupt?!

Hiding something from me,

You don’t trust me enough.

We’re not used to it,

Because now I’m intrusive,

I protest against your protecting,

And suddenly you’re abusive!

You know my heart,

For yours, I need an explanation.

You can’t expect me not to hurt,

When we’re under contemplation!

So how can we go on,

When your unrelenting still remains?

Surely you wish to end all this,

BEFORE we go insane!

by AwaitingHerPurpose©

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Tue, July 19th, 2011 11:22pm

If someone truly loves a person. They need to know the important things about the person they love. If they can not achieve trust, than love can not be gained. I like this poem as well because of the way you make it seem like somebody is about to lose composure and sanity.

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Tue, July 19th, 2011 11:24pm

This is a very personal poem, so i am glad that i could get that emotion across. Thank you!

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Wed, July 20th, 2011 7:55am

Wow! amazing poem! I've been in this position too. Exactly how I felt! your an amazing writer!!!!!!

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