EYES NEVER LIES
I WAS QUITE SURE OF HAVING FORGOTTEN THE PAST,
BUT REALIZED THE AUTHENTIC STATE OF MY BROKEN HEART,
WHEN THIS MIRROR OF EVERY HUMAN SHOWED ME THE TRUTH,
& MY MIND & SOUL REJECTED THE PROPOSAL OF
WELCOMINGAND ACCEPTING THE FUTURE WHOLE HEARTEDLY.
THIS MIRROR IS KNOWN TO SPEAK THE TRUTH IN REAL,
WHICH CAN OFF COURSE NEVER BE NULLIFIED.
IT SHOWED ME THE CURRENT & CORRECT STATUS,
WHICH EASED ITSELF OFF BY THROWING SOME LIQUID,
LIKE A STREAM BY WHICH EVERYTHING GOT SCATTERED .
THIS PIECE OF REFLECTION IS OFTEN SAID TO BE
THE REFLECTOR OF EVERY HUMAN'S REALITY ,
OFTEN BEING MISTAKEN AS THE CLONE OF
EITHER THE BRAIN OR OUR PERISHABLE HEART ,
BUT IN THE END IS IS TERMED AS WHAT WE KNOW AS OUR EYES
Submitted: April 18, 2011
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Very good piece of work! I loved it. Please feel free to read any of my work & leave comments or opinions. I would really appreciate it. Sometimes it is our eyes that give us away when we are trying to hide what we are feeling to others.
Wed, April 20th, 2011 4:33amAnd again a very nice piece of writing^_^ Fell free to come and check me out to.
P.S Another like from me^_^
Excellent! The eye is the window of the soul!
Wed, April 20th, 2011 10:30amHave you not mentioned in the last line that it is the 'eye' that you're referring to, I confess, I shall never be able to guess it, for I'm too ignorant.
I swear, only after reading your works, I'm ashamed that I'm not able to write poems. I initially thought poem writing just needs a good command over language and nothing else. But I'm wrong. Yes, it's a divine art. Hats off to you.
All the best.
Keep writing.
(1 mistake - you added an extra 'f' in 'of course'. Check it:))
Now in order for me to look through your eyes I need a little more info...like your date of birth...and also, I've read your poem "EYES NEVER LIES"...all that I can say to you is you have the right name...AWESOME...Have a good day!!!
Sun, July 17th, 2011 10:44pmI really like this! It was a poem that made me think and I LUV that!:) My fave verse was the last one. Keep writing!
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wow. how do you come up with this kind of thiking? good writing
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