EYES NEVER LIES

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

"EYES NEVER LIES" DEPICTS THE TRUE FACT THAT OUR EYES PLAY A SIGNIFICANT ROLE IN OUR PERSONAL LIVES,ESPECIALLY OUR LOVE LIFE.
IT SAYS EVEN THAT , WHICH BECOMES VERY DIFFICULT TO EXPRESS THROUGH WORDS.

EYES NEVER LIES



I WAS QUITE SURE OF HAVING FORGOTTEN THE PAST,
BUT REALIZED THE AUTHENTIC STATE OF MY BROKEN HEART,
WHEN THIS MIRROR OF EVERY HUMAN SHOWED ME THE TRUTH,
& MY MIND & SOUL REJECTED THE PROPOSAL OF
WELCOMINGAND ACCEPTING THE FUTURE WHOLE HEARTEDLY.



THIS MIRROR IS KNOWN TO SPEAK THE TRUTH IN REAL,
WHICH CAN OFF COURSE NEVER BE NULLIFIED.
IT SHOWED ME THE CURRENT & CORRECT STATUS,
WHICH EASED ITSELF OFF BY THROWING SOME LIQUID,
LIKE A STREAM BY WHICH EVERYTHING GOT SCATTERED .



THIS PIECE OF REFLECTION IS OFTEN SAID TO BE
THE REFLECTOR OF EVERY HUMAN'S REALITY ,
OFTEN BEING MISTAKEN AS THE CLONE OF
EITHER THE BRAIN OR OUR PERISHABLE HEART ,
BUT IN THE END IS IS TERMED AS WHAT WE KNOW AS OUR EYES


Submitted: April 18, 2011

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Vassellucci

wow. how do you come up with this kind of thiking? good writing

Mon, April 18th, 2011 8:14pm

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THNKX DUDE

Tue, May 24th, 2011 1:02am

pearlgirl

Very good piece of work! I loved it. Please feel free to read any of my work & leave comments or opinions. I would really appreciate it. Sometimes it is our eyes that give us away when we are trying to hide what we are feeling to others.

Wed, April 20th, 2011 4:33am

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THNKX AND SURE I LL VISIT U ................TC.THNKX

Tue, May 24th, 2011 1:07am

Darkie

And again a very nice piece of writing^_^ Fell free to come and check me out to.
P.S Another like from me^_^

Wed, April 20th, 2011 7:12am

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HMMMMMM. THNKX SO MUCH BABY

Tue, May 24th, 2011 1:11am

Graeme Montrose

Excellent! The eye is the window of the soul!

Wed, April 20th, 2011 10:30am

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THNKX

Tue, May 24th, 2011 12:59am

arun

Have you not mentioned in the last line that it is the 'eye' that you're referring to, I confess, I shall never be able to guess it, for I'm too ignorant.
I swear, only after reading your works, I'm ashamed that I'm not able to write poems. I initially thought poem writing just needs a good command over language and nothing else. But I'm wrong. Yes, it's a divine art. Hats off to you.
All the best.
Keep writing.
(1 mistake - you added an extra 'f' in 'of course'. Check it:))

Wed, May 25th, 2011 5:50am

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thnkx so much.by the way my vocabulary is very bad as i am always into music . i am into poetry from january this year....ha ha aha.bt thnkx once again for your comments

Tue, May 24th, 2011 10:55pm

TAGS

Now in order for me to look through your eyes I need a little more info...like your date of birth...and also, I've read your poem "EYES NEVER LIES"...all that I can say to you is you have the right name...AWESOME...Have a good day!!!

Sun, July 17th, 2011 10:44pm

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thnkx so much

Mon, July 18th, 2011 3:56am

neena731

I really like this! It was a poem that made me think and I LUV that!:) My fave verse was the last one. Keep writing!

Tue, July 19th, 2011 5:08pm

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thnkx once again dear bt dnt frgt tu knu abt u

Tue, July 19th, 2011 10:10am