Why won't you let me go?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This a first attempt at a poem....so yeah I would like some feedback on how to make it better so I can improve myself :)It's basically about how I am feeling at the moment.

Submitted: December 29, 2011

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Why won't you let me go?

My wings have been clipped.

My feathers torn out.

I'm sick

Sick of this feeling.

Sick of these chains.

Chains they've placed on me.

These chains.

Cold and heavy.

They make me hurt the ones I love.

I want to be free from these chains.

Free from this cage.

Why won't you let me?


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