Fallen Last

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Picture Prompts-Writing Contest- Poetry This picture made me think of what happens when you help others but in the end..no matter what you'll always be alone..Be the Fallen one.

Buried beneath this skin of dying pleasure
coldness invite himself to taste my completion
this image shows nothing that they could see
the figure which start back at me seem to hold a secret I don’t know of
Snow-white wings falter my body spreading all this false hope
knowing that I’ve Fallen Last

Darkness would find a way to shower itself this tatter cuts
screaming to be free from the chains which bound my body here
I lay here asking myself if you can hear my voice echoing from this other-side
only you never see me
watching you
guarding you even if I am in pain
Even if I Fallen Last

Time moves on
life comes and goes
I help the best I can alone always in the end
finding my body dancing to this unreliable sin
cause somehow in the end
I know that you will always return to win
even if I Fallen Last.


Submitted: April 06, 2011

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CJam

interesting poem. I will try to read more of your work


i'd appreciate it if you would, if you had some time, to cehck out some of my pieces

Thu, April 7th, 2011 6:43am

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'Thanks for reading and I'll check out your stuff when I can'

-Ax-

Thu, April 7th, 2011 4:29pm

Vampire slayer

I really like this poem! it is so deep and has such emotion. You are a really good writer :)

Tue, April 12th, 2011 5:53am

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Thank you.

Wed, April 13th, 2011 2:54pm

sweet cheeks

lol OOPS typo!! lol haha i meant the word choice was fantastic! haha lol!
~sweet cheeks xoxo

Sat, April 16th, 2011 11:35pm

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thanks
-Ax-

Sat, April 16th, 2011 8:46pm

Virtual Writer 2010

Great poem - a lot of imagery used. Very emotive :)

Sat, April 23rd, 2011 12:37pm

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thank you.Enjoy my work.

-Ax-

Sat, April 23rd, 2011 6:47pm

Graeme Montrose

interesting poem, vivid imagery

Fri, April 29th, 2011 3:43pm

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Thank you. I like that you like it.

-Ax-

Fri, April 29th, 2011 2:55pm

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