Your wish is my command chpt. 1

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
It's about a girl who's been hurt so many times that she just don't trust anybody anymore. Her heart has been stomped on and thrown out. Will it mend in time?

Submitted: May 25, 2009

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Submitted: May 25, 2009

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What's the wonders of love? Your only going to get your heart broken in the end no matter what. I mean why risk it? Is it really worth it? To go through years of trusting your special someone and then find out it was all a game. A huge lie that will tear you down the moment it hits you. Then your gone. Gone into misery and you think nobody wants you anymore. Why try to love again knowing this will happen to you? So now your this lonely person who can't stand the thought of dating. You like sex, true, but a commited relationship is just not you. You think love is no longer a part of you. It's the players rock.

"Loni how could you do this to me? After all this time I thought you loved me. I thought you trusted me! How could you just up and leave me without so much as an explanation?!" said Antoine. He had walked in to find Loni packing her things. "It's over Antoine. I just can't do this anymore. It's not me. okay?" replied Loni. Loni looked up into his eyes, his begging eyes. He seemed so innocent on the outside. For a minute she believed his act but she had to stop herself. After all these years she just wanted out. She wanted to get away from the stress and beatings he put on her. Loni never did anything to make him mad but after the wedding, Antoine started coming home late. She knew she should have left then. It was plain to see. But her love overpowered her mind and she decided to stay. What a decision that was.

Antoine asked her to put her things down one last time and when she didn't, he slapped her right dead across her face. Laying on the floor in her own tears, Loni felt helpless. Now she couldn't even leave?! She knew she would get out of there soon enough but with Antoine drinking tonight, she would have to bare till morning. Glancing up to see that he had left the room, she got to her feet and headed for the kitchen. "What would you like to eat tonight hunny?" Loni asked in her sweetest voice, scared he might hit her again. "Fix me up something girl. Can't you cook? Think sometimes. Damn." He replied sleepily. So that's what she did.

In the back of her mind she wanted to take the frying pan across his head but she couldn't. She couldn't hurt him even after all he's put her through. Before the wedding, everything seemed perfect. The perfect guy had come and swept her off her feet. He would go out and buy expensive jewelry for her and then she would come home to candle lit dinners. When he asked her to marry him, he did it in a very romantic way. She came home to find rose petals leading through her house to the outside door facing her pool. She opened the door and with the petals scattered, she read "will you marry me?". In tears she broke down. The answer was of course yes but look where that got her now?


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