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Submitted: March 05, 2008

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All was good until it happened. The date was August.4, 2004 and the time was 2:04 am. A party had just ended and everyone was filled with anger as the police had escorted them out. Bianca was terrified as she saw Vance, Romeo, Nick, Gina, Kyra, and Maria look her way and laugh. She then looked the other way in a quick second and by then Vance had known she had called the police. It all started when Bianca was dancing with all her friends and having a good time and the music was blaring and no one heard Bianca getting raped or her loud screams for help, and crying for him to let  go of her, and giving her back her freedom.
Bianca was going to the bathroom and then all of a sudden someone had covered her eyes with a black cloth and everything was a blur until she broke out and got to a phone to call the police. She hadn’t known why, but everyone had known she had called and all the rage spotted in her direction. She thought to herself that she would tell no one of this until she had known who had done this to her first.
The next day no one spoke to her. All they did was stare and give dirty faces, but the only one who had actually spoke to her that day were her two best friends Kayla and Derek. They wanted to figure out why she called, but she was too petrified to explain her horror at that party. She had to get to the bottom of who had raped her. All she had known was that there was just one person and that he was wearing black and blue and black Nikes, but then she thought “How could I figure this out?” Kayla and Derek had eventually stopped talking to her because she wouldn’t tell them.
For three months she stayed alone scared and lonely as can be, remembering all the good times she had before this happened. Going home and going to school with her mom worried and her dad high and not even caring about why she is so lonely and scared. She’d lie on her bed crying every day, but this day was different beacuse then a message appeared on her computer. She read the message while water droplets were going down her face as a waterfall and her face flaming red as fire raging. It was the boy who raped her.
The message said “What happened at the party was our little secret and you can’t tell anyone about it Bianca because you’re too idiotic to figure out who is writing to you and it’ll stay on your mind forever and ever and you’ll stay lonely, scared and sad for the rest of your life until you die alone.” Bianca wrote back with anger saying “Who is this?!” He wrote back “You’ll never find out Bianca until we meet again which is NEVER so tough luck!” Bianca signed off and suddenly called Kayla to ask her who was Virgo435. Kayla said the name and suddenly Bianca burst out with tears running down her face and her cheeks burning red and she told Kayla what he had written to her and she got angry and she screamed “Why are you trying to accuse my boyfriend!” and then she hung up.
Bianca was still crying, trying and she tried to catch her breath. She then fell asleep with no food, crying, but maybe a few of her mom’s diabetic pills. In the morning her mom had realized she wasn’t waking up and she called the ambulance to come get her. The doctor had asked her why she had so many bruises, but she had no reason. Also the doctor had said that Bianca was three months pregnant and if she keeps on doing this to herself the baby can get hurt. Bianca’s face was burning once more and she started to cry again. Her mom was startled and as soon as they got home her mother was screaming and was so curious of how this happened, but Bianca wouldn’t tell her.
Her mother called up Kayla’s mother and started to explain how Bianca was three months pregnant and how she was so disappointed with her life and how this had happened Bianca’s mother and Kayla’s mother were very good friends and that is how Kayla and Bianca met. The next day no one spoke to her again, but call her drug addict and Kayla looked at her with a dirty face, but in shock. Bianca’s stomach was a little chubby and once Kayla had heard from her mother she had told everyone and everything had gotten even worse. All the teachers were calling her into their offices to find out why she is so sad. Bianca just looked down with embarrassment and didn’t even think to answer their questions.
A few more months had passed and Bianca soon found out she was having a boy and that it will be due in two more months. Of course she had a stomach and everyone called her names, but she didn’t care because she knew that she would love her new baby boy and that no one could take that love away from her.
When she was walking home a black car pulled up and once Bianca saw it she ran, but the car was obviously catching up and two boys put her in a headlock and then into the car. It was Virgo435 and he was asking her why she was telling everyone that he had raped her and she was to terrified to answer. He said he was too good for her and why would he rape her while he could get any girl he wanted.  The car pulled up to a park and they pushed her onto the floor and started to kick her in the face, ribs, stomach, and back while she was yelling.
Then all of a sudden Kayla, Derek, Lea, and Nara came and they forced him to leave her alone while some other two boys had held him. Bianca’s face was red and her body had bruises and her nose and mouth gushing with blood. Her stomach was hurting and they called the ambulance. She was brought to the hospital once again and the doctor told her “So that was it, why didn’t you just say it in the beginning?” Also she had broken one of her ribs and when she had known Vance had gone to jail for what he has done, she finally felt good and not alone once again.
It was finally over and she could be Bianca Rodriguez again and not that girl or drug addict. She was finally happy. Until the doctor had claimed her baby had died inside of her stomach and they were terribly sorry. Her face once again turned red and her eyes were tearing, but it’s been four years since the incident and Bianca is now nineteen. She still remembers what happened from time to time, but she doesn’t let it get to her and next time she decides to go to a party she’ll know how to handle herself.
 


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