I See You There

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A very short poem i wrote in the morning whilst in my bathroom! Random i know, but that's just me!

I See You There

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I see you there, right before my eye
I see you there, gliding through the sky
I see you there, even though your not
I see you there, as you begin to rot
I see you there, i see you with my sight
I see you there, a stranger in the night
I see you there, right infront of me
I see you there, though your just imaginary

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Baker 2008


Submitted: November 18, 2008

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Frank Ramtahal

This is amazing. Excellent flow and good rhyming. Like it.
Could you clarify on the comment you made on my poem The Power of Fire.

Mon, August 22nd, 2011 12:06pm

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Thank you very much. Check out http://rj-baker.blogspot.com for my latest random work.
Im sorry my comment was more self promotion, but your poem was really good, nice choice of words to evoke imagery, very good work.

Tue, September 6th, 2011 4:15pm

SmileyFaceTalia

Hi. I notice this was written a couple years ago. But I like it. It's interesting as well. I do find it strange that you worte this in your bathroom...

Thu, September 8th, 2011 8:48pm

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Inspiration strikes at the most random moments, haha. Pretentious sounding much? Thank you for your comment, im glad you liked. Peace RJB x

Thu, September 8th, 2011 3:54pm

mpspenguin

Lol this is really good! Sorry, just read your message.

Mon, September 12th, 2011 4:59pm

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