Sun and live together in seperate worlds

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Sun and moon-contrast

The sun high hot alone blooms like a flower after winter warming the creaters who welcome it with different skin

The moon cold hard surronded is the center of attention popular among the stars is shuned by the creaters who close there eyes and wait untill it tucks away


Submitted: May 31, 2011

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EdwardJBradleySr

bananapeace1:

Interesting, thoughtful, imaginative, vivid & naturalistic imagery and well written. Enjoyed reading it.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. As with your other posting. Both well deserved.

If you apply to become a fan, I'll gladly add you.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, June 1st, 2011 4:20am

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