The Moment
Drowns out my voice to your symphony
Into fathoms of thoughts to accompany
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The chords of heart, plays every string
When I sense you like daffodils in spring
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Blooms bright smile as my eyes beseech
For your presence , in silent melody speech
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Besotted with you in bossom of this moment
Seeks a ripple of pleasure ambient
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Freeze oh time! when I reflect deep
In his charming eyes, in his arms as I seep
Basilia
Submitted: January 13, 2013
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just amazing work, love this radiant jewel, soooo bright, deep and loving. AWESOME STUFF, glows like you. Thanks for putting this up!
Sun, January 13th, 2013 4:04pm
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thank you!! Vincey :) thanks for the lovely comment :)
Sun, January 13th, 2013 8:40pm
brilliant.. i like your poem.. very creative:) you really describe the feeling of being in love through those words..
Sun, January 13th, 2013 4:44pm
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aahh...thank you! this truly from heart
Sun, January 13th, 2013 8:41pm
Excellent word play. I liked that. Keep writing!
Sun, January 13th, 2013 5:41pm
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thank you :) so much for going through my works and leaving your valuable comments
Sun, January 13th, 2013 8:43pm
Hello Basilia
Nice moment....excellent work .... nice imagery.. and great expression of feelings...
--Shaleheen
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thank you Shaleheen :) for going through my work and leave a comment :)
Tue, January 15th, 2013 3:53am
Very good poem! The use of words and the lyrical element in the poem is excellent. I equally liked this poem in the January issue of the, 'Reflection.' Thanks a lot for sharing this poem with us.
Sun, January 20th, 2013 7:24am
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Aww...thank you so much brother :)
Sun, January 20th, 2013 6:24am
I think that was a fantastic wordplay. Unable to understand half the words you used, I lost my time haha...
Keep writing.
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ha ha...lost your time trying to understand what I wrote? OMG1 but thank you brother for sparing time to read my works :)
Thu, January 24th, 2013 7:40am
Awesome love poem this was very good! maybe better than some of the ones I wrote and they were pure emotion :) I think the last word of the poem should be sleep though
Fri, February 8th, 2013 3:16am
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Aaah! Thank you :) no ..its actually seep not sleep.I tried to depict the way water enters into the crevices leaving no space is the way I wanted to hug him :)
Thu, February 14th, 2013 6:00am
Ahh.. It is really damn romantic, loved it !
Mon, February 25th, 2013 9:20am
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Aww...thank you di... :)
Mon, February 25th, 2013 9:00am
Veryyyy sweeeet
Sun, July 14th, 2013 5:36pm
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Hahaha..thank you..! :) :)
Mon, July 15th, 2013 5:57am
Am speechless... I need to see a Dentist
Wed, August 21st, 2013 7:12pm
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Lol..Thank you! Jerry I guess not the dentist :)
Thu, August 22nd, 2013 11:38pm
The timeless moment of Love, when all the world disappears if only but for an instant. you have brought this through in such an artistic way.
Sat, October 12th, 2013 2:59pm
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Yeah..!!That moment..of love can take us into a different world..Thank you from bottom of my heart for such lovely comments
Mon, October 14th, 2013 6:32am
Romantic & Hopeful sounds like a young girl
s expectant heart.Before it's broken Big Sigh!
Remember trust betrayed is trust lost.(sadly.)
Keep writing.
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Thank you...random romantic thoughts and expectations by the girl in poem.. :)
Mon, October 21st, 2013 5:12am
I loved the last two lines most... This poem is mysterious and lovely. you can come back and read mine too,I would really feel glad if you do this..waiting eagerly.
Sat, November 9th, 2013 2:35pm
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Thank you dear..Its my pleasure to read your works.I would soon check them :) tc
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You capture this moment perfectly. The imagery that is conjoured by your words is beautiful. I feel LOVE through out this poem.
Sun, January 13th, 2013 2:08pmI like that you used a near rhyme when you needed it to keep your message and flow as it should be.
I enjoy how rich in poetic sentiment this is, making for a most enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing
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that's really happy to know how deeply you got connected to my work.thank you Mr.Joe :) thank you very much for encouraging comment :)
Sun, January 13th, 2013 8:37pm