The Moment
Drowns out my voice to your symphony
Into fathoms of thoughts to accompany
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The chords of heart, plays every string
When I sense you like daffodils in spring
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Blooms bright smile as my eyes beseech
For your presence , in silent melody speech
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Besotted with you in bossom of this moment
Seeks a ripple of pleasure ambient
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Freeze oh time! when I reflect deep
In his charming eyes, in his arms as I seep
Basilia
Submitted: January 13, 2013
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just amazing work, love this radiant jewel, soooo bright, deep and loving. AWESOME STUFF, glows like you. Thanks for putting this up!
Sun, January 13th, 2013 4:04pmbrilliant.. i like your poem.. very creative:) you really describe the feeling of being in love through those words..
Sun, January 13th, 2013 4:44pmExcellent word play. I liked that. Keep writing!
Sun, January 13th, 2013 5:41pmHello Basilia
Nice moment....excellent work .... nice imagery.. and great expression of feelings...
--Shaleheen
Very good poem! The use of words and the lyrical element in the poem is excellent. I equally liked this poem in the January issue of the, 'Reflection.' Thanks a lot for sharing this poem with us.
Sun, January 20th, 2013 7:24amI think that was a fantastic wordplay. Unable to understand half the words you used, I lost my time haha...
Keep writing.
Awesome love poem this was very good! maybe better than some of the ones I wrote and they were pure emotion :) I think the last word of the poem should be sleep though
Fri, February 8th, 2013 3:16amAhh.. It is really damn romantic, loved it !
Mon, February 25th, 2013 9:20amVeryyyy sweeeet
Sun, July 14th, 2013 5:36pmAm speechless... I need to see a Dentist
Wed, August 21st, 2013 7:12pmThe timeless moment of Love, when all the world disappears if only but for an instant. you have brought this through in such an artistic way.
Sat, October 12th, 2013 2:59pmRomantic & Hopeful sounds like a young girl
s expectant heart.Before it's broken Big Sigh!
Remember trust betrayed is trust lost.(sadly.)
Keep writing.
I loved the last two lines most... This poem is mysterious and lovely. you can come back and read mine too,I would really feel glad if you do this..waiting eagerly.
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You capture this moment perfectly. The imagery that is conjoured by your words is beautiful. I feel LOVE through out this poem.
Sun, January 13th, 2013 2:08pmI like that you used a near rhyme when you needed it to keep your message and flow as it should be.
I enjoy how rich in poetic sentiment this is, making for a most enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing
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that's really happy to know how deeply you got connected to my work.thank you Mr.Joe :) thank you very much for encouraging comment :)
Sun, January 13th, 2013 8:37pm