Poem by: Basilia
Genre: Literary Fiction
Submitted: July 06, 2013
© Copyright 2016 Basilia. All rights reserved.
This poem brought a broad smile to my face. You capture the essence of a flower and make it almost human. I instantly drew a comparison between a flower and a woman. Both so delicate and beautiful and having the inate ability to insire joy in others.
Your comment even brought a wide smile..your comment says you got connected to my poem..this gives me immense pleasure..thank you!
very love Ly super sweetness, love this, you have told a radiant story of a flower, SINCERE BEAUTY, thanks for sharing, soft, delicate, uniquely tickled by your fascinating talent!!!!
Hey! Vincey :-) your comments make me happy.I'm glad that you loved it! This is what that makes me write more...thanks a lot for encouraging through your feedback,tc!
Absolutely beautiful!!! Words can't describe the beauty of this poem. The last stanza was really emphatic. Great work!! :))
Last stanza took me lot of time because I did not want to end the poem so soon...But I guess I conveyed what I really wanted to..heart felt thanks :)
Damnnnnnnn I love the last lines soooooooo much....starting from Ends up to She is a flower!....
Yes She is! Indeed..your comment brought a wide smile here..thanks a lot Dave!
Wow very well used example of flower with woman, brilliant piece of work. Keep writing dear :)))
I tried to depict the life of a lady in a flower..thank you so much for boosting me up with your uplifting comments di :) tc
stranger in the corner
the sincere beauty of..... well Beauty! be it a woman or a flower, both can inspire tears of joy, and unrestrained happiness.
Oh..thank you so much! Well.. I agree with you!
I agree with comments made here.The heart of a flower is the perfume it shares. Or in a bridal bouquet.Church, place of worship, celebrations.
I agree with your comment too..thank you for dropping by and leaving your honest comments :)
oh my goodness, Basilia, now you wanna make me cry and smile. This poem was so melancholy and sublime
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