Summer Mornings

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we wake up every day.We realize the beauty and the freshness of that particular day of summer.It feels so special that we wish every morning is as beautiful as this one.

SUMMER MORNINGS

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I lay asleep in bed, window side

chirping birds in the nest, they abide

smooth, moving curtains to fresh air

calms down my dancing strands of hair

warm touch of sunshine beam

onto my face it rolls and gleam

silent rumblings ofleaves on tree

as it sways to the air gentle and free

bunch of flowers peeping into my room

spreading the scent of joy in their full bloom

I slowly rub my eyes with hand

inorder to see, did I dream of any wonderland?

everyday I feel like I'm newly born

this is a blessing of each summer morn :)

-Basilia

Submitted: May 13, 2012

Non-Fiction joy happy calm summer morning breeze fresh

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Gagan

very good the flow was undisturbed and the writing was flawless. Felt it was written in a free flowing motion when thoughts kept rolling out and you kept jotting them down. Liked it Friend :)

Sun, May 13th, 2012 1:56pm

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actually i wrote this in evening.. :)thank you so much for liking it

Sun, May 13th, 2012 9:37pm

GuiltyPleasure

Wow! How refreshing this is a happy poem about happy days.. i'll remember it in the mornings :)

Sun, May 13th, 2012 8:11pm

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yes..absolutely a happy one, the feeling of happiness that we get every morning :) thanks

Sun, May 13th, 2012 9:39pm

Richard Staschy

Awesome!!!! I love happy poems!!!

Mon, May 14th, 2012 5:05pm

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thank you :)

Mon, May 14th, 2012 11:24pm

Darklady

Lovely poem, honestly! I really enjoyed reading it, it makes us feel nice and smile, all the references you have to summer and spring ... very simple but nice flow of words.

Tue, May 15th, 2012 1:45pm

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thank you so much for reading and giving feedback
:)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 6:48am

ashi17

Wow lovely short and cute poem, presenting beauty of summer morning, very refreshing, well written sharia , good work :)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 2:42pm

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its shaziya dear..yeah every morning is to be cherished..
thank you for reading :)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 8:01am

Vikrant

A very beautiful poem spreading all the happiness of a breezy summer morning.

Sat, May 26th, 2012 1:24pm

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thank you :)

Sat, May 26th, 2012 9:34pm

Scrawls and Doodles

beautiful!! i adore the summer season and you have painted a very very pretty picture!
gets my 'like' :)))

Sun, May 27th, 2012 8:23am

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thank you so much dear.summer mornings are even my favourite and that's what made me write this :)

Sun, May 27th, 2012 7:12am

lee blaze

very nice work shaziya :-P it took me back to my childhood village days ;-)

Sun, September 30th, 2012 12:25pm

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he he..thanks for commenting on my work lee :)

Mon, October 1st, 2012 5:08am

glitter snow426

oh , soooo beautiful indeed!! love this sparkling star, very warm special!!Thank you warmly for your wonderful comments to me, appreciate it! be in touch

Thu, October 11th, 2012 4:28pm

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thank you :) Vincey ..

Sun, October 14th, 2012 12:42am

Insane Membrane

a pleasant way to wake up and start the day ... mine sadly is far from this for my eyes don't want to open and my body totally resists getting out of bed !

enjoyed the read

Wed, November 7th, 2012 3:43pm

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ha ha....humour touch! again thank you.. :)

Wed, November 7th, 2012 7:58am