SUMMER MORNINGS
I lay asleep in bed, window side
chirping birds in the nest, they abide
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smooth, moving curtains to fresh air
calms down my dancing strands of hair
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warm touch of sunshine beam
onto my face it rolls and gleam
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silent rumblings ofleaves on tree
as it sways to the air gentle and free
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bunch of flowers peeping into my room
spreading the scent of joy in their full bloom
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I slowly rub my eyes with hand
inorder to see, did I dream of any wonderland?
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everyday I feel like I'm newly born
this is a blessing of each summer morn :)
-Basilia
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very good the flow was undisturbed and the writing was flawless. Felt it was written in a free flowing motion when thoughts kept rolling out and you kept jotting them down. Liked it Friend :)
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actually i wrote this in evening.. :)thank you so much for liking it
Wow! How refreshing this is a happy poem about happy days.. i'll remember it in the mornings :)
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yes..absolutely a happy one, the feeling of happiness that we get every morning :) thanks
Awesome!!!! I love happy poems!!!
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thank you :)
Lovely poem, honestly! I really enjoyed reading it, it makes us feel nice and smile, all the references you have to summer and spring ... very simple but nice flow of words.
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thank you so much for reading and giving feedback
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Wow lovely short and cute poem, presenting beauty of summer morning, very refreshing, well written sharia , good work :)
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its shaziya dear..yeah every morning is to be cherished..
thank you for reading :)
A very beautiful poem spreading all the happiness of a breezy summer morning.
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thank you :)
beautiful!! i adore the summer season and you have painted a very very pretty picture!
gets my 'like' :)))
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thank you so much dear.summer mornings are even my favourite and that's what made me write this :)
very nice work shaziya :-P it took me back to my childhood village days ;-)
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he he..thanks for commenting on my work lee :)
oh , soooo beautiful indeed!! love this sparkling star, very warm special!!Thank you warmly for your wonderful comments to me, appreciate it! be in touch
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thank you :) Vincey ..
a pleasant way to wake up and start the day ... mine sadly is far from this for my eyes don't want to open and my body totally resists getting out of bed !
enjoyed the read
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ha ha....humour touch! again thank you.. :)
I Love summer mornings....in fact I like summer more than any other season. This poem is so good, I loved it :))
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oh..! nice to know that you like summer :) thank you :)
Summer mornings:) .I think I like them. Your poems are exceptional. The way you describe everything is great. Thanks.
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thank you! Imad :) for your kind review and encouraging comments :)
a beautiful poem, i wish every time i get up, i have this feeling
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thanks :) I have this feeling everyday.Its summer here :)
Yaya! summer! I really enjoyed reading this....Long days small nights...Cheerful feeling!
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You told me you like summer, so hope this one's a happy delightful poem for you :)
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