Poem by: Baz
Genre: Children Stories
children, poem, funny, yak
Submitted: June 08, 2009
"What's that I see,
That is rolling towards me?
What on earth could it be?"
asked the yak.
"It's a freshly chopped tree,
Which has broken quite free.
So I really should flee before..."
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These are the best little rhymes for the kids ever!
Gorey and gruesome - and the kids just love them. Or at least mine do! I'm considering self-publishing a little book of these (just for myself) having the intro lines on one page and then turning overleaf to have the WHACK!! line (or whatever) on a big double spread on the following pages. I think my son would get a kick out of that. I know I would!
Richard M Bromley
i see a pattern emerging. what are you going to splat next
Ah, I'm way ahead of you! Have you seen my other poems on this theme?
No prizes for guessing the taglines in each case! :-)
Thanks for the comment.
its amazing how the shorter poems take on much more meaning. i love these! haha
Hi HG. My kids (understandably) have short attention spans, so the shorter poems work better for them. For me too, 'coz they're easier to write!
Thanks for the comment, and for becoming a fan. I'll try to live up to your expectations!
So cute! You should write a book, and have it published Baz.
My son (3.5 years old) likes this series of poems. Gets a kick out of seeing the animals getting splatted, squished, or whacked!!
I have self-published a little book of the 5 poems in this series for my two sons. I awaiting delivery as we speak. I hope they like them.
I will have to read these to my little girl she is 4 and would just love them. S.R.
My boy is 3.5 and loves them, so I think she might like them all right. Do let me know!
Whack!!! yay!!! lol:)
He'll be all right. Strong things, yaks...
poor yak! he got skwashed :(
Shoudda moved faster and got out of the way!
Yeah, he was just too slow!
=O...that poor yak! :( Lol, still, good poem...poor yak, if only he'd moved a little faster! v.v a moment of silence for the yak
He made a full recovery, I promise. Yaks are strong creatures. (Pretty dumb, though.)
Poor Yak! I loved it just as much as the other one i read, about the dragon! Again, wonderful writer!!!
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