Sin Covered World

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The world has come to an end. Sin.

It's cold,

Uncaring.

It shows no mercy,

Harsh on the soul.

Shows you the wrong,

Leading you astray.

Steals your hope,

You're not living anymore.

This is a disgrace,

How can it be?.

Dead to you,

Dead to me.

It can turn our life around,

For the worse.

What has this world come to?,

Will there be an end to this madness?.

All I see is evil,

A world covered in sin.


Submitted: June 21, 2011

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FloweredStag

wow that was pretty strong, I really liked the title and how you ended the poem, good work *thumbs up*

Tue, June 21st, 2011 1:52am

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awww thumbs up to your thumbs up hahaha i enjoy reading your booksies as well ;)
-BeautifullyPure*

Mon, June 20th, 2011 7:16pm

fallen ninja

wow. very deep poem! i enjoyed reading it and it was very well written

Tue, June 21st, 2011 2:32am

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Thank you so much! For this poem i used a meaningful view of what the world has come to. Sin. Im gald you enjoyed it and will be writng more in the furture! thanks a bunch!
-BeautifullyPure*

Mon, June 20th, 2011 8:35pm

ladysgirl

wow. I agree with them :) you are a great writer :)
keep it up
*fist pump*

Wed, July 27th, 2011 2:39am

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thanks you so very much :)-BP*

Wed, July 27th, 2011 9:59am

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