Crushed and Beaten Down

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Break up poem,I know its kind of similiar to the other one:)

You Don't know how I feel ,
I'm pulling you down with me,
Would you like to follow me?
You know good things happen 
out of tragedy,
Why don't you just kill me and you will live happily.

You say you love me ,prove it to me
I need to know if you will stand by me.

Our love is poisonous,it always been
It chokes me and you're drowning with me,
Our love is different,it's suffocating
I need you to help me
I need you out of my way maybe

I'm about to panic,
It's a nice view on the edge,
I see the light and the happy life,
Should I jump?
Will you jump with me?
Together would be just a bigger tragedy,
Don't do it,It's better if I stay alone,
There will be someone else to save me
its not you , I know it
I can feel that you're pushing me.

I love you, you know it,
If I stay  you'll just lie 
and that would kill me

It's my turn to lie,
It's you're turn to listen,
If I leave you'll think I'm weak
But we are face to face ,
Why don't you just tell me the truth?
It's the youth.

I'm crushed and beaten down,
Now I'm in a ghost town.

Submitted: March 28, 2014

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This poem flows so well, it's very good! I probably read it faster than intended and it came across like a song. Keep writing! ~Danni

Fri, March 28th, 2014 9:54pm


Thank you ,i'm really happy you like it:) When I started to write it I actually wanted it to be a song but it turned out to be a poem:'D

Sat, March 29th, 2014 1:13am

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