Beautiful But Not Goodbye
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Poem by: bellahepburn17
I began to write everything
in my life that was beautiful
I got down to your name
and thats when the pen snapped
and I began to cry a little
you are the end
the ultimate
what everything was leading up to
and my knight in shining armor
was a boy in crumpled tin- foil
I can write until my fingers bleed
because
I cant
CANT
stop at "happily ever after"
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I like how you adress that happily ever after just isn't enough. I agree that if your truly in love you won't settle for that famous last line.
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epic awsomeness!!!
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epic awsomeness!!!
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lol
Wow this was really good! :) Loved how you said that the knight in shining armmor was a boy in crumpled tin-foil =) That was a good metaphor for how guys aren't sometimes the way that you picture them. Great job! I look forward to more!
~Adalia
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aww thank you so much, you are so kind!
Oh, the pen snapped after her name. It knew. I loved this. It was sweet and made me want to cry in a good way. =)
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awww thank you!
Sorry about the double post, but PS anyhow, I now I want a tin foil knight of my own. ^_^
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is alright lol and doesnt everyone?
"and my knight in shining armor
was a boy in crumpled tin- foil"
those were such great lines, you took such
a common line and changed it into something so blunt, very pretty poemn
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thank you so much
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