SLAYER: Battles of Existence (Help)

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I need help with choosing a type of character. Could ye help me? (READ description)

I am looking for a type of firearm-holding character that is very powerful. I already put down BELLATORS, AVATARS, and SPARTANIIs.The story is in a game show that is in a universe controlled by government of Existence, a place where every universe ever known is at. This game show is in an arena thatcan house over one million viewers.The rules are that a single person or team must rise up in the ranks,impress the judges, and win a medal to be renown as the world's greatest champion. The game is safeand competitive because the player must use a modified resurrection area that if they die, they come backto life safely. Also, theybattle to the death until the fourhighest ranked teams or players are chosen and sent tothe main games.
The players who compete here are NOT criminals. They wanted to compete. No one dies here. They just get a little exhausted.

The game for this year is now:
TEAMSLAYER.

HighestRanked competitors:
1st: SPARTANII
2nd: Avatars
3rd: ??? (Answer the question to put this team in)
4th: Bellators.

Tell me WHICH type a character that is either modern or futuristic team from any universe that can wield a firearm.Use characters such as PREDATORS,ELITES, etc., and tell me WHY you want them to be in that spot.

FIREARM characters only...

Thank you.


Submitted: August 24, 2010

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zorbo123

How about, jedis, samurais, dragons, ninjas. Thats all I could think of for now.

Try checking out my prologue to a fantasy im writing. I'd love feedback and your thoughts on it.

Fri, September 3rd, 2010 6:58am

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Thank ye, Zorbo123. I was thinking of putting the Jedi in the novel but the problem was is that they may use force powers but they have limmited weapons. The rest was that they don't hold firearms. Samurais have bows and swords, which are not very useful againsst advanced guns like battle riffles and rocket launchers. Ninjas use stealth and still have no firearms. Dragons are ariel fighters and are not use to being on the ground against SPARTANs and Bellators. They are great ideas but I need firearm-holding characters.

I'll try to read your story as soon as I can. I'll see to it!
Great ideas for SLAYER, though!

Thank ye...

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Sat, September 4th, 2010 6:24am

JelicaWriter

You could put Dragons, but it could go like this. As they can shape shift, retaining all their powers one of them misuses them and kills a living person whose is not a dragon. As punishment he is sent to compete. My vote goes to the dragons.

Sun, September 5th, 2010 11:38pm

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Hmp... Interesting...
It's well but this is not a normal slauter house...
It's a game show... It's not like "Death Race" but it's a show where people fron all universes come together and compet in honor without really killing...
The way it works is that this is a Harry Potter/A Sorcerer's Apprentice like thing. Existence is a place where there are all universes held together. The Government of Existence, or GOE, made sure nobody dies because almost ANYTHING can happen in Existence. In the game of SLAYER, they go to an artificial world that is either made by Existence Members (Like Forge World from Halo: Reach) and fight to the "Death." The thing is that they don't really die. If a contestent "dies," they are brought back to the Existence Doorway, a pla e were beings from all over Existence enter, though there are many ways to travel to other universes. They are brought back but have to learn to breath again imediately, or they will die.
SLAYER is an honorable game without real killing. This was an insperation of Halo. The cameras are not physical and can go anywhere except through certain physical objects.
But good idea, thy Brother.

Thank you...

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Mon, September 13th, 2010 11:00am

Savina

How about some form of human/animal hybrid, such as a human with animal like features, It could be your own race you created, some kind of 'alien' being. Humans with scaley skin, fur, tails, animal-like ears, maybe even tails. Something none of us have every heard of, or even something that we have heard of, just told in a different way. All of these could easily carry firearms, or even have their own firearms that are unlike others generally used by the others, but of course not so powerful that they were indestructable. I would love to hear more about this story. My favorite genre of writing and reading has always been fantasy, and always will be.

Fri, December 31st, 2010 10:25pm

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Thank you, Savina.
You're idea is good, but all I need is a being from either another movie, comic, game, etc., like SPARTAN IIs and Avatars (Which are Green Barets). If you could find a creature out there like a SPARTAN II or an Avatar (Except for Elites and Predators, due to one being weaker then a SPARTAN II, and another one not really hacing a firearm), then I will put it on there. This may take time, but, if I find the right being, either from a creature in a Video Game or a Movie or etc., from you guys or me finding it, it should be a plesent novel.
Thank you, Savina. 8)

...P.S. The quote below is not an offense. It's just a quote I always put on here like DeviantART.

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Mon, January 3rd, 2011 10:13am

adm867

well i was thinking of a character from a comic/movie. Violet Saung Zach Sureth. shes a hemophage, a type of vampire human hybrid but shes not like a typical vampire, in her universe the hemophages are simply the infected and are hunted by the government. you said you wanted a powerful character who uses firearms. Violet uses dimension compressed technology so she can carry countless weapons with her and stored in an artificial dimension only she has access to, she gets her weapons by using two metal wristbands which simply materialises whichever weapon she wants into her hands

Thu, January 13th, 2011 3:08am

adm867

she gets my vote lol

Thu, January 13th, 2011 3:10am

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Not bad... But she is just... One character... right?
I'm not sure that a single person can take on four elite Bellators, four green barret Avatars, and four SPARTSN II Soldiers... I'm just looking for four people/creatures that are team fighters. I know she's strong, but it has to be a four-man group.
Good idea, still.

Thu, January 13th, 2011 1:27pm

adm867

ahh, i get it now. a team. yeah violets strong but against four bellators alone i imagine she would be torn apart lol. Most of the hemophages work in teams but because violet is the lead character she's kind of a renegade. still its a great movie definitely worth checking out. Milla Jovovich plays violet and the actual movie is called Ultraviolet. will have another think. this is really a challenge lol

Fri, January 14th, 2011 8:12am

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He, he, he!
I'll have to find the movie when I'll have time, though I may not write it in a while.
Still, they do sound strong. I may have to check them out when I get in the mood.
Thank you for the comment! 8)

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Fri, January 14th, 2011 8:14am

DonChapp

How about putting in a Gladiator? or maybe an group of ningizu(not sure how you really spell it) fighters?

Mon, February 28th, 2011 8:58am

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Hmmm...
Actually, it will have to be a specific Gladiator or Ningizu Fighter that is already made. If Spartacus had a gun with a group of three, then he could be in it.
Just remember it's a firearm-holder. It's not a bad idea, though. 8)
Thank you for your support! 8D

Tue, March 1st, 2011 12:43pm

Demyx306

I would choose Gears. They are probably the most recourceful, battle hardened soldiers I can think of.
They have seen things that would make a grown man take a shot to his own head...

...and because chainsaw bayonets are amazing...

Wed, March 30th, 2011 8:00am

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You mean from the game "Gears of War?" I could try that...
I may have not played that game because my XBox 360 was rented, but they are not the worse choice I can think of.
Thank you for your support!
8D

Sat, April 2nd, 2011 7:33am

Demyx306

Are you not going to do this after all?

Thu, May 19th, 2011 2:10pm

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Well, I'm still lookin' for a type of character. Plus, I still need to make the story line.
Somewhere in the future, I will.

Thu, May 19th, 2011 2:14pm

Zin Dar

I have a few suggestions if you're still taking them. I just found this so I wanted to contribute, it would be cool to see this story come to life.

1. You could have a one-man-army, a sort of Rambo guy, not necessarily him though. He may either be the super-tank like Rambo, or he could be a very sneaky man who works best alone due to his need for stealth.

2.The four characters of Borderlands are quite cool and all wield weapons of wide range.
Mordecai - Sniper+revolver
Roland - Machine gun + Shot gun
Lilith - Revolvers + SMG + Snipers (either you want to add the elemental effects or not)
Brick - Bazooka primarily, shot gun second but preferably his fists.

3. Try out a team from "Team Fortress 2"? You could pick any of them. Pyro/medic/sniper/tech etc.

4. Why not put a little team of "Cowboys"? Some men in leather, one with revolver, one with a rifle, one with shot gun and the last with some sticks of dynamite?

Keep me updated on this though. I see you have started the "Legacy:Rebirth" but there's only one chapter...

Mon, August 8th, 2011 5:22pm

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Why, thank you for the comment! 8D
You have great suggestions! The first one was quite unique, but I even somewhat doubt that a one-man-army could take out four Bellators, SPARTAN IIs, and Green berret Avatars. Not a bad idea, but it kind of goes away the team thing. ;)
The second one is my favorite. The team seems to be a good idea, but maybe new characters instead of the characters from the game (Yes, there can be characters BASED on the game, but not the characters who are IN it). But, still, it's probably the best idea out of all of them. I could make characters based off of them. :D
The Team Fortress idea is a good one, though they do seem a little... Different from the rest. They just seem like they're not ready against the more invincable soldiers.
The cowboy idea was pretty cool, but their technology is a little more older then the other contestants.
Probably the best one was Borderlands idea. They do have the technology to fight. The only thing I should change is to put my own characters in their universe.
Thank you! 8D

Tue, August 9th, 2011 6:45pm

Mr Dragon

How about something unexpected and maybe not a firearm character, like a Praetorian? Traditionally, they were Roman elite guards, but you can modify them for the modern times. Or perhaps you would prefer a party of snipers with beryllium scales? Or maybe a group of Rangers with Nightshadow cloaks? Nightshadow cloaks are something I just came up with that would basically be invisibility cloaks, except they're special made for the Rangers so the Rangers can attack enemies unnoticed. It's sort of an assassin's favorite cloak.

Sat, August 27th, 2011 4:51am

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Hmmm... Not bad, all though stealth is a little basic for SPARTAN II and Bellators, for one has an easier way to detect stealth and the other smells and hears better. I'll see what I can do when it goes on...
Thank you! :D

Sat, August 27th, 2011 1:15pm

D0C VEGAS

Transformers, or the like. It would add some cool features, having like three Transformers against 12 guys.

Mon, October 10th, 2011 3:06am

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Thank you for the comment, D0C! :D
Hmmm... Transformers sound interesting. The two things that sound a little questionable is their size and plenty of veriaty, though.
But it does sound interesting. Thank you, D0C!

Sun, October 9th, 2011 8:12pm

Demyx306

How about the Replica Forces and/or ATC from FEAR?

Mon, October 17th, 2011 2:18pm

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Thank you for the comment! 8D
Hmmm... They are tough fighters, but, even though they are called Super-Soldiers, they can be killed easily by the main protagonist. Still, it's not bad. I'll see what I can find.

Mon, October 17th, 2011 2:31pm

Demyx306

Another idea could be the Mercenaries from Lost Planet 2, or the Ceph from Crysis.

Wed, October 26th, 2011 3:05pm

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Hmmm... Not sure about the Mercenaries, but I did hear from the Crysis soldiers, but is there any battles they won greatly as a group or and history of the accomplishments? It sounds interesting.
Thank you! 8D

Wed, October 26th, 2011 4:08pm

Demyx306

well in Crysis there are three notable factions (plus infected, but they only show up once, for like five minutes).

The USMC: They tend to dodge and use cover more than the others. Also are best equipped for battle.

CELL Corporation: They use rush tactics alot. always in large numbers.

The Ceph: They can cloak, jump really high, and have an electromagnet attack that damages tech

Tue, November 1st, 2011 2:07pm

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Hmmm... I'll see what I can do until other ideas come in.
Thank you! :D

Wed, November 2nd, 2011 6:03pm

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