Poem by: ben hardstaff
Submitted: February 04, 2013
A burglar's nightmare:
As he climbs through the window...
Woof! Woof! Woof! Woof! Woof!
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Hahaha!!! This actually really made me laugh im chuckling as i write this, nice one!
Ha ha, cheers. These littke Haikus can be quite funny if you pick a good subject.
I am not a fan of haiku. I probably like only about 1 in every 200 I read. This was one of them.
Thanks Alice, i think they're just a bit of fun really. I couldn't sleep last night so i wrote twenty of them... This one amused me so i put it on BOOKSIE.
At last, someone who understands a Haiku. Well done. Very witty.
I don't know whether i do fully understand Haiku. It might just be luck haha. What's the secret???
Loved it, a true joy. A very inspired last line. Worthy of ending up in an anthology.
Ooh thanks Bert. The last line took a while haha.
It's cute and clever.
Simple lines that say so much.
Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!
That's given me an idea Bob, thanks :)
A clever haiku and funny. Reminds me of my dog when he hears something at night. Always freaks me out to wake up to him staring out the window and growling. Hope that it chases burglars away, or at least the squirrels!
Thankyou Patri, sometimes the simple ones are the best :)
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