A Close Encounter

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a bit of nonsense about meeting an alien.

 

 

A Close Encounter

 

There once was a traveller man

who took off with a master plan

to a gruesome place

in the midst of space

called Zorka-Venutia-Zukran.

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He was captured and caged by Kring,

the extraterrestrial King,

whose silvery skin

was more than akin

to that of the Slithery Ning.

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The Slithery Ning is a beast

with talons, and razors for teeth:

a terrible thing

with a deadly sting

that's known upon children to feast.

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Said Kring, to the traveller man -

"Badanga! Badanga! Badan!"

Said traveller back -

"Badanga! Badak!"

and that's when the battle began.

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So, a war of the worlds was waged:

with frightful and terrible rage

 

 

 

UNFINISHED........MORE TO COME


Submitted: October 27, 2013

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artie1947

this is good, a good laugh, just what is needed.

Mon, October 28th, 2013 2:37pm

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Thanks Artie, it's not finished yet I don't think??

Mon, October 28th, 2013 8:07am

quiet dreamer

haha. I'm already looking forward to reading how the story goes on^^

Mon, October 28th, 2013 4:20pm

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Not sure where to go with this one...yet?? Maybe that's enough??

Mon, October 28th, 2013 9:32am

quiet dreamer

Well, of course this could end here. It's already good as it is. But i'd love to read on. The names and the language you created are very funny! ;)

Mon, October 28th, 2013 5:46pm

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I'm ending it I think, just gonna change last line, thanks for comment.

Mon, October 28th, 2013 10:47am

moonphish

dug it....it's like arthur c. clark meets dr, seuss...made me laugh

Wed, October 30th, 2013 9:44pm

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Good good. Cheers Alvin. It's not finished yet. More to come when my brain comes up with more.

Wed, October 30th, 2013 4:01pm

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