Poem by: ben hardstaff
Genre: Religion and Spirituality
Submitted: February 08, 2013
capture every move you make:
Big Brother Britain.
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Like this, very impressive mate
It's ok... The ideas good but it needs to be more punchy. Like your fatherhood Haiku which sums up so much so succinctly. That, my friend is a cracking Haiku believe me. I'll tweek this a bit later.
I liked the subject, and I liked the Orwellian reference. It seems there's a bit of a haiku craze developing here on Booksie.
Yeh, and it's my fault ha ha. Thanks for the comment.
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