Poem by: ben hardstaff
Submitted: January 03, 2013
My First Haiku
Here's five syllables,
and now i give you seven.
Are you satisfied?
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Yea iam happy......,
I'll admit, it made me smile.
Then my work here is done...
You got me lost there, buddy...I don't even know
what a Haiku is...ignorance from me.
It's Japanese format for a poem amounting to seventeen syllables Juli. The first line has 5 syllables, the second 7, and the third another 5.
Hahahaha! Ben...I take it you´re not fond of such brevities, but I have to say you truly pulled your creativity from your sleeve and made it work...
Cheers, mate! LIKED it!
Ha ha cheers. A witty little poem i thought (big head swelling). Cheers for the comment Mystique.
Hi Ben, very clever
I love haiku and glad I stumbled upon this one.
Thanks, i've just written about ten in the last hour. They crack me up, check them out :-)
Sweet! On my way :)
Ha ha, cheers Lisa :-)
Haha! Excellent!!!! Loved it
Cheers Shane. I am going to do a series of them. It's snowing outside (thank God it's not snowing inside) so i'm staying in bed and writing a series of animal Haikus today. I'll start with a parrot Haiku i think.
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