Submitted: March 28, 2011
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this is really good, i love your clever words and comparisons and imagery...you are quite talented
Thu, February 2nd, 2012 3:37amThanks phoebe, you know these are baby steps I'm taking, and receiving such support can only help me improve.Thanks again
Thu, February 2nd, 2012 7:16pmIs this Morocco, Algeria? Something's going on. a thought provoking piece. Salut.
Fri, February 24th, 2012 10:24pmFantastic work Benyoucef, and I would guess English isn't your first language, or even your second. Incredible and painful recent history, Algeria, and still going on, which you describe so well. I've followed your country's story since reading Camus a long long time ago. I hope good times are on the way.
Mon, February 27th, 2012 12:55pmexcellent ineresting intense and profound great write .... Oh By The Way .. We Have Plenty of New Writes Up and of Course Loads of Older Ones You May of Missed Reading if You Would Like To Visit Us And Browse. :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 7:22pmThis is really powerful writing.
The message is clear.
You are an excellent poet,Benyoucef.
I will remember this poem,it has affected me deeply.
Dee.
This is so neat- I forgot how much I love your writing. Oh and I just realized I never commented on this- this was great work. The words really hit me- it was so powerful and clever. Oh and I was reading your comments I didn't know English was your third language- or that this was your first piece in English- wow! Thats even better, thats amazing great work here!
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Graeme Montrose
A powerful piece of poetry! You manage to cover a lot within these words! emotion is present, meaning, the words flow in a smooth ebb, easy to the tongue, excellent,
Mon, March 28th, 2011 2:16amAuthor
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Thank you so much,you cannot believe how much it means to a beginner
Sun, March 27th, 2011 7:36pm