Unrequited love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

some people write because they have secrets
i write because i cant afford a psychiatrist

Unrequited love


Unrequited love will last for a life time

Loneliness will make it worse

There’s beauty in solitude

But only when chosen

But take comfort in knowing

 the universe does not care

it’s does not recognise your pain

your simply an atom

unimportant as the rest

there is no path

there is no destiny

but there is always tomorrow

Submitted: August 09, 2016

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Sometimes I guess it is nice to think how unimportant you really are. And poetry, or writing in general, can be the best psychiatrist of all. Good job.

Tue, August 9th, 2016 4:06pm


Thank you, if you ever have the time i wrote a 8000 short story you may enjoy.

Tue, August 9th, 2016 9:55am

Lionel Walfish

Yes indeed !!!!!!!

Fri, August 12th, 2016 12:05am

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