First Love - A Song

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Song Lyrics  |  House: Booksie Classic

I think secretly with every love song/poem I write, I dedicate it to my first love. Even though he'll never read this, I just want to shout out to him and say, "Dude, I hate you! You suck!" lol

First Love
 
 
I know this feeling,
Heard of it,
Never felt it before
It’s one of those things
That leaves you begging for more
 
So many times
On so many sleepless nights,
This was what I asked for
You were who I wished for
 
And now it’s true
My heart thumps loud
The only way to fall from here is down
 
I’m sad to say
This love will past
Good things are never made to last
First loves always end in pain
But we’ll fall harder
Next time
All over again
 
I’m love struck,
Star struck,
From the things you do to me
I’m out of time,
Out of lies,
We were never meant to be
 
The time has come
My heart thumps loud
The only way to fall from here is down
 
I’m sad to say
This love will past
Good things are never made to last
First loves always end in pain
But we’ll fall deeper
Next time
All over again
 
Yeah, and do you believe in forever?
(Because I know I don’t)
Yeah, and do you believe in fairytales?
(That’s the one thing I still do)
 
But Cinderella was already written,
So were Snow White and Belle,
Life just doesn’t have enough of those sappy fairytales
 
Yeah, we’re all out
(All out)
(All out)
 
Baby, they’re all out
(All out)
(All out)
 
So I’m sad to say
Our feelings have past
Good things were never meant to last
First loves always end in pain
But baby, we’ll get up and fall all over again
 
Yeah baby, first loves can’t be replaced
 
Yeah baby, we’ll get up and fall all over again.
 
(Don’t be afraid)
(Don’t be afraid)
 


Submitted: November 07, 2009

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monicastar14

Aww! That was so sweet. Yeah your right good things are never meant to last, it's sad but so true. So by reading the summary is it okay to assume your first live broke your heart? Well, it happens to everyone.

Great song!! Ioved it!!! You should write more of these!

:]

Sat, November 7th, 2009 8:48am

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hahaha AWWWWWWWW thank you!!!!! lol, i was feeling random so i just starting writing things down today.

And lol, i think it's fair to say we both broke each other's hearts. It was complicated. Lol, and i can get into it but u know that'll probably take days.

Sat, November 7th, 2009 1:09am

Storielover1117

lol. This was so good.
Amen to the part about the shoutout...heck to the mhm...
My favorite part was when it said
'The only way to fall from here is down'
You're so lucky that you can create songs...I totally can't...at all. lol. =)

Sun, November 8th, 2009 1:39am

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hahaha i cant either. im a toal noob. lmao

Sat, November 7th, 2009 10:18pm

Fungus Apple

I love your song!!!
(in a way it's kind of ture!) :)
I find that I like this line the best

Good things are never made to last

Sun, November 8th, 2009 7:16am

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aww thanks. *tear* im glad u like it!

Sun, November 8th, 2009 1:56am

BenArsenal

Woo, nice!

You did it all by yourself? That's so awesome.

Now to get someone to sing it. Haha.

Sun, November 8th, 2009 10:26am

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hahaha thanks.

Sun, November 8th, 2009 9:10pm

BonNuit

That was quite impressive me dear. You're like the most multi-faceted author ever haha

And may I just say I think the caption to this about made me spit my pop out from laughing haha.

However, even though I don't like Taylor Swift (don't kill me haha) I could see her singing that song

Sun, November 8th, 2009 6:43pm

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Hahahaaha really?! U could see Taylor singing this. eep. that makes me super happy. lmao. And ok, he was a jerk what can I say. lol. and rather than saying im a multifaceted author, u should just say im a multifaceted person. lol. I always get voted that among any groups of my friends.

Sun, November 8th, 2009 9:07pm

jwb

... I love! Great job. You get my vote too.
... But I would like to add that I have had better love, than my first love. Many times.
...

Sun, November 8th, 2009 8:17pm

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Yup. i think so too. But nothing like the first right. Its always a memorable one, even if it was stupid. I think falling in love the first time for real is just something really special. =D

Sun, November 8th, 2009 9:03pm

Phoebe Gardens

Major ahhhhhh bimbobunny! Honestly that was so touching and heartfelt! I could so imagine the way it would sound to music! It could be a number 1, I'd defo buy it! Haha!
My fav bit was "But Cinderella was already written,
So were Snow White and Belle,
Life just doesn’t have enough of those sappy fairytales"-AMAZING or what! I was like, blimey she can write good lyrics!
But bless you, you and your first love. I can sense a lot went on between you two.
You're right with first loves usually end in pain for a variety of reasons-so unfair, damages your view on love for life if you fall for a baddie! Grrr!

Tue, November 17th, 2009 7:05pm

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I KNOW!!!! Tell me about it. My first love got addicted to Cocaine. lol

Tue, November 17th, 2009 10:25pm

ninjaNIGHT

Wow.
Your an awesome writer :D

ninjaNIGHT(:
xx

Sat, November 21st, 2009 9:05am

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aww thank you!

Sat, November 21st, 2009 1:48am

LupusSteppe

A romantic cynic. Wonderful. What genre of music would this be sung to?

Thu, December 31st, 2009 5:11am

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pop. thats the ONLY thing I listen to. Dont even bash me about it bc all my friends do. Singing is my favourite hobby in the world and so usually I listen to things I can actually sing along too. Meaning pop or a bit of country. usually, they're girls too but I do listen to guys sing from time to time. Sometimes I even make my voice go all manly bc it seems to be so disturbing ability i have. (I can totally man sing better than the Backstreet Boys)

Thu, December 31st, 2009 1:39am

LupusSteppe

That you can man sing more than the Backstreet Boys is not saying much. Do you enjoy the angry young women: Alanis Morisette, Sinead O'Connor and Pink? Even if you don't appreciate their music, check out the lyrics.

Fri, January 1st, 2010 9:08pm

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no, no and well... I do like pink's lyrics. never heard of the second one. A.M pisses me off. I hate her voice times a thousand.

Fri, January 1st, 2010 10:32pm

LupusSteppe

Read her lyrics and use your voice then. She was also one to be easily brought to hate, but has mellowed with the years. Sinead is a good angry Irish girl, also mellowed now. Somehow their anger showed up as passion in their singing. Looks like the world is ready for the next one. U up to it?

Sat, January 2nd, 2010 9:52pm

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hahaha dude. life isnt as easy as u make it to be. dont want to brag and say im THAT amazing of a singer but i think im A LOT better than some of the trash they put out this days. *cough* *cough* *miley cyrus* lol. but i think u need like the looks AND the body to become super big. or have some sorta connection.

I sing for a hobby anyways. I've given up my actress/singer dreams. Now I want to be a doctor. But PHYSICS is just raping me from behind the ass.

Sat, January 2nd, 2010 10:48pm

LupusSteppe

Been there done that, the T shirt is not worth wearing. Physics relies on you seeing the world accurately, and you seem to have that talent (a good teacher helps too, even a sexy one).

There are some reasonably successful singers who did not get there by looks, just depends on your target audience.

No the world is not easy, but sometimes we over complicate stuff. I hear that Mills and Boon pay well for stories a bit like yours, perhaps a bit of a holiday job for you. Just won't get the great feedback you seem to thrive on, and I would no longer get to read your stuff. (Poisoned challice)

The new profile pic looks a bit like man-jocks, don't take this man voice thing too far now...

Wed, January 6th, 2010 12:29am

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Well, Ive given up on everything pretty much. I think im at the point in my life where I need to find myself again. It sounds stupid, i know, but im not bitter about it. xD I enjoy soul searching though my parents dont exactly feel the same way.

AND NO MORE PHYSICS!!!!!!! NO MORE!!! NO MOREE!!!!!!!

And I think the new profile pic is CUTE!!! but dont worry, i'll change it eventually.

And Mills and Boon? I have no idea what that is.



Tue, January 5th, 2010 6:34pm

LupusSteppe

Mills and Boon is a group of romantic books, not respected by literary critics, but sell well. I suspect you could churn similar books out easily, while chosing what else you want to do.

Sad to hear you giving up on things. If it's just slowly cutting down your choices until u pick something by elimination that's ok. Life in a job you hate is only a step better than life with no job at all, but smart people don't need to be in either situation.

Didn't say I didn't like the pic, I like the cheekiness of it.

U snowed in?

Do you have anything that really challenges you?

Wed, January 6th, 2010 3:15am

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lol. u think my stuff can actually be published even if it is by M&B? lol. Not that i really care about literary critics. they take all the fun out of reading. Personally, I think my stuff is really kiddish and lol. OK I ADMIT IT! I think its extremely embarrassing. I would NEVER have anyone i know read my stuff. It would just be too weird. like they can see into my soul or something. lol.

And I am working. Just so u know that im not some hobo that sits around and does nothing all day. ;D And i dont hate it. it just doesnt make enough money for me. Plus i have these dreams of going into some nice job that will land me a millionaire as a husband.

COME ON! A girl can dream!

Tue, January 5th, 2010 10:28pm

LupusSteppe

Yes and she should.

Wed, January 6th, 2010 9:43pm

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=D

Mon, June 21st, 2010 11:14am

LupusSteppe

PS. I definitely think your stuff could be published, not that I am in any position to decide. It's one way to start putting those dreams into action.

Wed, January 6th, 2010 10:15pm

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haha i dont really have much faith in myself. Im doing this bc its better than watching mindless t.v. but whatever. who knows right? lol

Wed, January 6th, 2010 2:24pm

LupusSteppe

You never know unless you try; but I am not sure you should be commenting on your faith in yourself on an open forum, call me paranoid, but I think it makes you vulnerable.

Yes, much better than TV. Do you think there will be a time when we stop buying TVs?

Also, one way to improve your self confidence is to try a challenge. Isn't that exactly what u do for some of your characters?

Thu, January 7th, 2010 3:58am

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haha its sorta hard to explain my character to u if u dont personally know me.

Call me bipolar but im not lacking in self confidence. In fact, Im very confident in myself. I just dont like the fact when other ppl are confident in me bc i feel like they shouldn't be.

Ahh~ maybe its bc i dont like disappointing other ppl. I can handle my own feelings very well. I accept challenges and sadness with open arms. But i dont like other ppl dumping their feelings or their expectations on me. It makes me feel caged.

Wed, January 6th, 2010 8:11pm

LupusSteppe

Hmmm. A caged bimbobunny sounds quite alluring.

No pressure.

Thu, January 7th, 2010 5:49am

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lol

Wed, January 6th, 2010 9:58pm

i hate kung fu frogs

I love this. It reminds me of how I write like half of my songs dedicated to my ex. You should totally check out some of my songs though. Keep up the good work! XD

Fri, January 8th, 2010 2:18am

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thanks! and i know. freaking like 90% of my poems and stuff. all for that stupid loser. lol

Thu, January 7th, 2010 6:34pm

RACHELnZAC

hmmmmmm.....loved the love girl....lol, and its true love does leave u begging for more, oh wait, is that love or something else?? *wink* haha, sorry, dirty old me....loved this poem, u realy are multi-talented arent ya!? can i borrow some?? i havnt updated in MONTHS!! its killing me!! i need ur awsomely supurb writing talent!its just not fair that your hogging it all!! :P

Rachel
xoxo

Wed, January 13th, 2010 1:33am

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hahaha awwwww thats so sweet of u!!! ? lol

Tue, January 12th, 2010 6:19pm

DonsFantasy

Very sweet, even with the unhappy ending!

Fri, February 12th, 2010 3:17pm

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haha thanks!

Fri, February 12th, 2010 12:57pm

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