This is my favourite poem i have written its about my sister that i lost when i was little, not even some of my closes friends no alot about me so it will be an insight for them too as this links to myspace. lol




To loose somebody who is part of you.

You wake up and she is there and gone the next.

You put her to rest.

She has gone some where special.

As the spirit said it had to be.

Blood is life and must be kept hold of always.

In heart and memory it will always be there if you look hard enough.

What I can say is I am being looked upon from above with a smile

Because I know eventually it will be my turn to join her.

We will be reunited forever.

Submitted: August 04, 2007

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such a beautiful and truthful way to remember your dear sister, how happy she must be to have you as her brother

Sat, August 4th, 2007 3:53am


thankyou for your kind comments lol

Sun, August 5th, 2007 5:56pm


very sad written beautifully from the heart

Thu, November 8th, 2007 2:11am


thankyou very much its my favourite poem ive written and it also has the most meaning

Fri, November 16th, 2007 11:54am


I can relate so well..I have lost a soul mate...beautifully written

Evelyn (JoKa)

Mon, November 26th, 2007 4:44am


I sorry for your loss and i hope through writing you can help others. lol

Mon, November 26th, 2007 12:43pm


Nice I Liked It.I Know How You Feel I Lost My Brother Last Year The Day After Mothers Day. I Wrote Some Poems About Him As Well If You'd Like To Read Them.

Fri, July 11th, 2008 5:23am

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