Poem by: BITSxOFxKINKY
fun, laugh, float, bubbles, brian, pop, blow, kinky, tracey, orbs
Submitted: March 14, 2012
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I really like it. It is really cute. Excellent job. :)
Thank you Michael happy you like our bubbles :)
thank you i thought so to :)
amazing. Awesome Job
Thank you Ash kind of you to read and comment on our poem
I have never seen the likes of this. I was getting vertigo reading the poem. My mind kept switching between the text and the bubbles in the background. Interesting phenomenon.
Aside from making me (google eyed) I liked the concept.
but dont bubble do that when you blow lots of them you get that googly eyed feeling of being inide a riing bubble so i take that as a big compliment rather than iffy artwork lol :) thank you hun
That is a very nice poem there lol
I really liked it,and you know what, my dad's nic name is Bubbles lol.
Good job Kinky ^_^
thank you :) i knew a friend called bubbles and i always played with my kids with bubbles a cheap toy that gives hours of fun and our pup loves them now kids grown up :)
I liked it. Creative. Enjoyable read. Nice style. Mike
Glad you enjoyed it... Tracey has fun with her poetry... I am better with the stories...
Another dash of creativity which keeps floating like bubbles in you my friend, how you do it? Like all your other writes, this one also is a definite like :)
Thank you hun i think as kids brian and i were the daydreaming kids teachers wernt sure of but it was because our minds were creating imagination :) and now what was classed as a bad thing is great for writing
wow...i didn't know you could do visuals like that....cute poem....bubbles rock
you cant on here but i do art on my lappys paint file then using image option on the booksie posting box i add it in like any normal picture ... thanx for this lovely comment
Yes this is a winner and a most enjoyable read.
thank you hun (( bubbly hugs for you ))
I never knew there were so many ways to describe a bubble; excellent!
bubbly cuddles thank you they are such fun but simple things :)
Just dont let me pop your bubble. ~wink~
ohhh i have many bubbles see how many you can pop there never ending :) im a unique woman
Hi, this was a splendid piece! I loved it, so light and airy. It also spoke to a person's need to just be free from it all, like the "bubbles", just floating. Nicely done...
thank you ... bubbles are a bit like life but much more giggly :)
I like it, very good.
thank you :)
Its a great poem. Ive never seen a poem bout bubbles before. i like this one though
thank you i was playing with my puppy with the bubbles and realised they were very underated fun things :)
I have had many hours of magical fun with my children and blowing bubbles....A very clever poem and I like how you have set it out you are much cleverer then me :-)
thank you brian ... i dont know about cleverer maybe artistic and stubbon i have this stubbon streak that makes me very persistant when i get an idea in my head of what something should look like or be like :)
I loved the end. Going from sad to happy that quick. XD
Thanks for this.
oh bubbles are such giggling fun thanx glad your enjoying
An Opus to bubbles I love the line orbs of pleasure because at any age a bubble will make you smile as you remember a time past
yes they do i lve them bubbles they make me giggle thank you ian
very cute, great bubbles story, WONDERFULLY TOLD!
Thank you very much .. i will be around this week to do some reading i hope :)
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