My heart remains cold

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A person so grieved by the betrayal of his lover

When the summer wind blows ~ Why is my heart cold? ~ When the lights fill the sky ~ I stand in the dark, so blind ~ Spring has filled their hearts ~ While autumn descends in my backyard ~ I ask myself why I grieve ~ When joy is all they speak ~ Is there something missing? ~ Is it me so incomplete? ~ Or was it you who turned away ~ And left me burning in pain ~ Was I the fool? ~ Who trusted you ~ Believed you were the lifeline ~ Together till the end of time ~ Or was it you? ~ Who is the reason of my gloom ~ You became the disease ~ The one who was to heal me ~ Now you are gone ~ A part of me is lost ~ The sense of happiness forgotten ~ No strength to summon ~ Let the summer wind blow ~ My heart will remain cold


Submitted: November 09, 2009

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ladygothicka

Love it mate, really well written. Excellent and touching. Beautiful.

Mon, November 9th, 2009 9:17am

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Fanx alot!:)

Mon, November 9th, 2009 1:44am

denada

hello!

this is very much close to reality, filled with a lot of emotions.. i like it , nice

Mon, November 9th, 2009 12:22pm

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thanku for your opinion:)

Mon, November 9th, 2009 4:25am

angellynn

Sad but very well written. Grieving is such a hard emotion to over come.Wonderful poem.

Angellynn:D

Mon, November 9th, 2009 1:01pm

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Thanku...yes its hard to mend a broken heart

Mon, November 9th, 2009 5:42am

ZeroG57

Beautifully written. Great job and thanks for becoking a fan!

Mon, November 9th, 2009 9:05pm

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Thanx alot! and it was my pleasure:)

Tue, November 10th, 2009 7:29am

Graeme Montrose

Great work there wonderful poem, full of emotion and truth!

Mon, November 9th, 2009 10:44pm

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Thanku!:)

Tue, November 10th, 2009 7:29am

BrooklynAzraelBitesBack

Great Poem! :D You got a like from meh!

Tue, November 10th, 2009 12:14am

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Thanx brooklyn!

Tue, November 10th, 2009 7:27am

Bittymae

i enjoyed this very much youre a great writer

Tue, November 10th, 2009 1:22am

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Thanx:)

Tue, November 10th, 2009 7:26am

frankie43

YOUR WRITING HITS HOME GREAT JOB. REAL HEART FELT POETRY!

Wed, November 11th, 2009 2:21pm

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Thanx dude!:D

Wed, November 11th, 2009 6:22am

Mistress of Word Play

This was so wonderful. I actually heard music when I was reading it. Nice job. Susan

Thu, November 12th, 2009 1:51am

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thankyew so much:) i appreciate it loads

Thu, November 12th, 2009 3:58am

NazireC

This was a treat early in the morning for me.
I loved the contradiction you made in each of your lines according to its precedence.
Summerwind-cold heart,
Disease-heal.
and of course every other line in your poem.
You didn't stray from the tone and the picture you portrayed was solid.
Excellent as always.
I am always finding these little treasures in your poetry.
Each time you surprise me with something different in a new piece.

Fri, November 13th, 2009 12:46pm

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yes it took some time to get the main image of the poem and then somehow all the words flowed into my mind and there i had a poem:) I am immensely grateful to you:)

Fri, November 13th, 2009 5:44am

freakygothgirl666

i absolutely love it! very well written and i like the way you portray your feelings. keep up the good work

Sun, November 15th, 2009 11:45pm

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hey thanx alot!:)

Mon, November 16th, 2009 3:04am

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