..SAVE ME..

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

YES I MENT TO WRITE EBIL NOT EVIL

I am reaching up for you

Your reflection above the ocean blue

The waves bath me

Sending a message of beautiful serenity

GOD SAVE ME

I hear your creepy whispering

You’re evil for encouraging me

The words from my fingers flood

Honestly they are turning into mud

Save me

I beg of you

SAVE ME

The blade touches my wrist

I stare into the forest mist

The music in my ears does blare

Does anybody even care?

Save me

I beg of thee

SAVE ME

I stare at you so near

Yet so far out of reach

Why do my cries you never hear?

Have I lost the ability of speech?

Save me

Please I beg of yea

SAVE ME

Save me from my demons

Save me from deaths shelf

Save me from the voices shamans

Save me from myself


Submitted: November 18, 2011

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LizLew

This is amazing, but the ebil ruined it. Sorry, it's true. Though, then again, it was pretty funny that you had a very serious poem, and then ebil comes into it. XD

Anywho, I really, rally loved this...I think it's my favourite so far. Liked. (Of course.)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 10:44pm

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Ok I am changing the EBIL THEN! LOL thank you. I was wondering about that to be honest.

Fri, November 18th, 2011 2:46pm

Vampire17

I luved it! Of course! I always luv ur work! it's always like luv && pain! It's great! :D

Fri, November 18th, 2011 11:50pm

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LOL. I unfortuatly have nothing new to say.

Fri, November 18th, 2011 4:10pm

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