I know what it is like
To feel alone
Cold, betrayed, hurt
Cut to the bone
I know you want to take that knife
Gash away your sin
I know you want to take those pills
To Overdose beneath the unharmed skin
But stop and think about those whom love
The bitches that you hate
All of the enemies would win the war
Should your life you take
So hear my voice
Reminds you not to bleed
I am always here
Death you really do not need.
I hear you cry
Begging for life
I will reach my hand for you
Remove the harmful knife
Allow me to aid your cause
Take the saviours hand
Let your mind defeat the pain
Save you from that distant land
Submitted: November 17, 2011
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Your a natural and a tad cocky as well I likey
Nice work mate your poems are growing with your release of emotion and starting to become thoughtfull and deep.
Nice
Awesome, as usual Mad. And actually, you could get away with being cocky, because you're brilliant. (Don't go cocky -_-)
Anyways, nice going Mad. Liked. :)
I wouldn't say that's exactly positive? I like this poem but you could include a symbol like an image of the grim reaper or a god associated with death to give even more meaning.
Fri, November 18th, 2011 9:46am
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Its positive in the way I am saying I understand and I will help you. But the examples are negative. I need a better image I agree but The grim reaper and death is most certainly NOT what I want to say. I am trying to say NO to all of that.
LOL anyways Thank you for reading
Like it :-)
Wed, November 23rd, 2011 9:54amFacebook Comments
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Megstar1563
wow, this was something really nice to write mad and you were right, I felt good and better on every line
Thu, November 17th, 2011 7:45amAuthor
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hahahaha Thank you. It may not be as powerful as my daarker desperate poem attempts but this is something I think many people never hear until it is to late.
Wed, November 16th, 2011 11:49pm