Ma soeur parfaite

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Perfect Sister

Cold and ruthless

Tormented and dark

Gothic and beautiful

Pain has left its mark


There may be some who see differently

But you are a loyal sister to be sure

And to all who seem to think so narrowly

FUCK YOU! You’re nothing but a bore


Now true the mind can sometimes deceive

The pictures and writes hide your true worth

But then again why be so clear and boring?

It’s a dishonour to mother earth


Now this is only how I see you

The perfect diamond in the rough

Forgive me if my words miss the mark

But you’re just so fucking tough


Honestly I am truly blessed by the gods

To have found you in this fucked up existence

Blood, pain, sweat and tears

Honestly girl you have so much resistance

I guess what I am trying to say

Is I love exactly who you are

Even though I cannot explain

You are with me near and far


So now I say don’t fucking change

You’re unique to me and close to heart

I know this is sad and mushy shit

But this is my emotion though apart


So as Jimmy says you are too awesome for words

I am afraid I have to agree

So forgive this feeble attempt at you

You are not always what people see

Submitted: November 13, 2011

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I have honestly failed to capture LizLew in this but I tried. I love you sis even if i can't explain it in written words.

Sun, November 13th, 2011 12:21am


This is the perfect poem for Liz! It's wonderful, and honestly? It does capture her personality. Awesome job sis! :)

Sun, November 13th, 2011 12:25am


I think I only portrayed a small slither of the whole puzle but thanks for your comment brother. Yours should hopefully come up soon.

Sat, November 12th, 2011 4:26pm


Mad, you have shamed me and have managed to make me look amazing,even though I'm far from it.
Thank you so much, this means so much to me...I LOVE YOU SIS!

Sun, November 13th, 2011 12:27am


I Love you too Liz. And You are Amazing. If you doubt it I will be cranky. And trust me I am not cute when Im Cranky. LOL. Na sis You are awesome, this fails you honestly. U are TOO AWESOME FOR WORDS.

Sat, November 12th, 2011 4:29pm


Sorry,but this is a little TOO over exsagerating or however u spell it.

Sun, November 13th, 2011 12:59am


Hahahahaha Poetry. Melodramatic at times. yet I swear these words are true. Liz is amazing. Get to know her and see for yourself

Sat, November 12th, 2011 5:01pm

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