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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

I have written so many negative poems I decided to write a positive one explaining my thought process and taking some themes from my favourite songs.

You think that you are alone

But this isn’t true

I care deeply for you

Let my love reach the bone


You scream where were you

You hide your bleeding eyes

You write your emotions for yourself

You ask if we are through


You believe that I am untrue

That I switch like a light on and off

But honestly I will be here for you

Until you beat my heart black and blue


I am no longer the bride

I am now a single girl

I promise you I am not engaged

To my longing of suicide


Let’s be honest I am you

I have asked so many questions

Now I have my answer

Dear sorrow, we ARE through

Submitted: November 15, 2011

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NO i do not have a personality disorder. I wanted to write this to myself and to everyone in the world. No matter if i know you deeply or dont know you exist. No matter who you are or what you are going through I am here for you. Thank you to everyone been here for me I am touched that you care and know I care very deeply.

Tue, November 15th, 2011 8:31pm


Can you guess what I'm going to say? You probably can, but just incase you couldn't, I loved it. XD The rhyming scheme was unique, but it worked.
Nice job, Sis. Love you.

Tue, November 15th, 2011 8:47pm


hahahhaa Thank you. Hahahaha yeah I never jump to people will love it. Thats how your head grows big. Thank you so much for reading sis love ya too. :)

Tue, November 15th, 2011 1:34pm


Poetry is a great medium for you. Keep it up. Just say no to sorrow!

Wed, November 16th, 2011 5:19am


Hahahaha yeah Ikr. Idk I am improving but thanks for the comment :)

Tue, November 15th, 2011 10:47pm

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