Quirky Ol' Jimmy Bro

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this for Jimmy. Liz helped me so much. I hope I do them both what they expect from me.

Dark yet Light

Depressed yet Cheery

A quirky door only slightly ajar

A complex puzzle left unsolved.

Is it wrong to say I know him?

Could I answer a simple question?

Maybe so

Maybe no

But his random lines have crept into my head

Into my hard head, cold heart, wounded soul

Fighting a dragon with soap

Honestly Jimmy, what a joke

You make me laugh when I am down

Between you and sis my fear has no hope

But now I cry for you

My funny pictures are not enough

I know you are sad

Just as you escape you are dragged back down

Well bro I am with you

Let’s tell the bastard of Depression to fuck itself

You are so random sometimes

Yet your humour is undeniable, infectious

You like all the best music

You’re just an all-around top bloke

Now I know these words don’t rhyme

There is no set tempo, nor words of timeless undiscovered beauty

But all I could do is write the words that to me ring true

Isn’t it obvious how much we all love you?


Submitted: November 13, 2011

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Blackdragon99

I don't know what to call this. I just wrote to show a slide of Jimmy. I hope you like this brother. Liz thanks so much for having a read before i posted it. OH Jimmy I hope ya like timeless, I went for a kinda vampy effect.

Sun, November 13th, 2011 1:15am

LizLew

Mad, I didn't help that much, and I was happy to anyway.
It was amazing, and very creepy. Kind of like a black hallway and then you see a soft candle light, illuminating the floor, yet creating more shadows...
Liked!

Sun, November 13th, 2011 1:18am

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I was trying to go that Vampire haunted yet humerous effect. Thank you so much sis you have really helped me. :)

Sat, November 12th, 2011 5:22pm

ghoul24

Aww, thank you so much! For the most part, you already know me. :) I love you sis! Thanks!

Sun, November 13th, 2011 1:19am

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hahaha I Tried. HOnestly I don't know how to sum people up into words. Thanks brother I love you and I am sorry i couldn't do better.

Sat, November 12th, 2011 5:21pm

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