Together Fornever

Reads: 384  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 15

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I found myself singing randomly and Playing around with my guitar and came up with this. I hope oneday it could be a song but for now I wrote it. I'm not sure if it's an ev song or something but I picture someone jumping o their death

Why did you choose to leave me

I cried for hours wishing you had stayed

A sickening crack, your skull caved

You body sprawled for all to see

Oh we'll be together forever

We'll be together again

Oh We'll be together forever

Together forever but never again

The click of jackal cameras

I hold my head bowed

This is not real.

It can't be real.

How can it be real?

Oh we'll be together forever

We'll be together again

Oh We'll be together forever

Together forever but never again

Oh how I cried at your demise

Yet it was said I just used you

I long for your embrace again

One little step to dispel their lies

Down I fall

So far down

Well be together forever

Together forever but never again

Never again Together again

Forever together Together forever

Never Again


Submitted: April 08, 2012

© Copyright 2022 Blackdragon99. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

Megstar1563

Love it :)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 4:59am

Author
Reply

Thanks. Sorry I nagged ya FB.

Mon, April 9th, 2012 3:48am

Loretta Jane

Amazing! You've got some massive talent here my friend keep up the good work!!

Mon, April 9th, 2012 8:38pm

Author
Reply

Aww thanks bro :)

Tue, April 10th, 2012 2:01am

Ian Dawn

It flows well babe, and is full of melody and rhyme and stickes in your head.

Mon, April 9th, 2012 10:20pm

Author
Reply

hahahaha Thanks G :D

Tue, April 10th, 2012 2:00am

Sgroi123

Wow really good! Yeah it flows well and it is catchy maybe at some point you'll record this song. :) :) :)

Fri, April 13th, 2012 1:32pm

Author
Reply

Maybe, I can't write music for it though. My guitar has major fret buzzes and high e string broken.

Fri, April 13th, 2012 10:25am

Imagine Words

A bit of a tongue twiater at the end but other than that great poem :)

Thu, May 10th, 2012 7:54pm

Author
Reply

hahahahaha ment to be a song actually. Im kind of writing it but I need more knowledge on Minor scales since its a sad song.

Thu, May 10th, 2012 1:31pm

fallenangel1992

hey its awesome . I liked how you put forever and never together and yet they fitted perfectly like a pair.

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 6:44am

Author
Reply

Hey Thanks :)
Im glad ya read and liked it mate :)

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 12:07am

booklove18

man this was good, i can see where it might one day be a song. :)

Fri, June 15th, 2012 5:39pm

Author
Reply

Hahahaha hey thanks :D

Fri, June 15th, 2012 6:19pm

love2loveyou

Very good! I like the repetitive nature of the poem near the end. It makes emphasis on your feelings. Very gooood!!!-
love2loveyou

Sat, August 11th, 2012 9:34pm

Author
Reply

Hahaha yeah, I can hear the music I would use to it but I am not skilled enough >:( GRR.
Anyways thank you for the read :)

Sat, August 11th, 2012 2:36pm

Si Cotic

WOW!! this is brilliant! i LOVED IT!!
keep writing!
Si
x

Sun, August 19th, 2012 3:57pm

Author
Reply

Thanks

Sun, August 19th, 2012 10:16am

Laila Alexander

The confusion in its emotions...hurt, and yearning, struggle to stay and the allure to let go is what makes it so very enjoyable. I loved it
Well done ;)

Tue, September 11th, 2012 12:26pm

Author
Reply

Thanks :)

Tue, September 11th, 2012 5:30am

Dean Talbot

Very well written!

Tue, October 2nd, 2012 3:00pm

Author
Reply

Thank you :)

Tue, October 2nd, 2012 8:04am

smircle

I was singing this along to a tune in my head! It's really good and has many emotions throughout it. Good job! :D

Thu, January 31st, 2013 7:22pm

Author
Reply

Thanks :)

yeah I have an idea for it but I can't get my guitar sounding right. Drop tunings are too deep but just a standed tuning is too cheery :/

Thu, January 31st, 2013 4:30pm

LyricWriter246

Wow, this is really good, I especially like the chorus...keep it up!

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 2:32pm

Author
Reply

Thank you :)

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 7:20pm

Maggie Williams

This was so good. Greta job please KMU of when you post another poem!:)

Thu, February 13th, 2014 12:11am

Author
Reply

Hey there :)
Will do, although I am working on novels at the moment.

Wed, February 12th, 2014 4:20pm

KW156766

This was amazing and I normally dont like poems but I loved this one! Great job!!! Please KMU on any of your other poems!!!! :)

Fri, February 21st, 2014 5:58pm

Author
Reply

Thank you, but as you say poetry just isn't for me. I prefer novels and scenes for novels.

Sat, February 22nd, 2014 11:20am

Facebook Comments

Boosted Content from Premium Members

Book / Religion and Spirituality

Short Story / Commercial Fiction

Short Story / Flash Fiction

Short Story / Humor