Imaginary Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

about a (fantasy) love that felt real, but wasn't.

my love for you is like a dream-

seems so real, then fades away.

my love for you has me in chains-

chains that melt away too soon.


to me, you are:

a ghost,

a haze,

a hologram,

a fantasy that feels so real.

 you make me:





cross my heart and hope to die.

 to you, am i:

a faraway star,

or the sun that brightens your day?

the perfect work of art,

or another random doodle?


my heart, my love, is killing me.

never thought i'd feel this way.

i'm trapped- i'm just a victim of

my imaginary love.

Submitted: March 15, 2007

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i really liked it. its really cute!! but i get ur pain all at the same time.

Thu, March 15th, 2007 11:39pm

Saturday Night

Liked the poem and the style you chose to present. Flows nicely to the end. Nice job. SN

Fri, March 16th, 2007 2:59am

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