Unless...

Poem by: blackrose13

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this is my first attempt at a poem. it really helped me express some of my feelings. hope you don't think it sucks.

you believe all of my lies

but if you looked in my eyes

you would see

the real me

i always put on a smiling face

but underneath i can't stand this place

i'm so sick of crying

it feels like i'm dying

these thoughts slicing through my head

sometimes it feels like i'm dead

alive or in hell

it's so hard to tell

you say you truly love me

but if you really knew me

you would drop me like i weighed a ton

so many lies, i don't believe one

unless you look closer

i'll drift even further

unless you can fix it...

...fuck you

Submitted: March 06, 2007

Poetry dying lies hell

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An Excuse To Speak Of You

Very emotional, i liked it!

Tue, March 6th, 2007 8:08am

Tina

Well done for a first timer nicely writen. thanks for sharing. x

Tue, March 6th, 2007 5:45pm

Lord Hoth

Fan-Freakin-Tastic

Fri, April 20th, 2007 5:04am

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