Curry of life

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

just try to create this poem :)

Drink 100% of lies 100% of innocence 100% of anger 100% of anger you’ll die later

Take a cigarette 20 packs everyday you’ll die 20 years earlier

Drink alcohol everyday you’ll die 10 years earlier

Love a person who doesn’t love you back you’ll die daily


Submitted: February 23, 2012

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kaotora

Nice I love the part about "love a person who doesn't love you back you'll die daily" that's totally true in my opinion. :) check out my poems if you get a chance.

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 7:27am

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oh yeah i will :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 2:16am

GuiltyPleasure

Yeah, true, i mean we can look at it from other perspectives too. Am i killing this person daily if i dont love him back... thats one.

what about my feelings... if i love someone else and he is not even aware of this and it kind of does not matter to him at all... so he is killing me daily too..

wow this love-thing is a deadly spiral... we cannot force anyone to love us back... we can just love.

what a contadiction... and praise to you expressing this paradox so beautifully & succintly :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 9:04am

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oh very thank you :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 2:14am

SmileValentine

wow! sis! congratz! rarararar xD

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 11:29am

yue thao

Hehe curry of life !! Nice ! NARUTO !!! aha. (;

Wow is this all true ???

Well written and nice job !! Thank u for sharing this (;

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 2:45pm

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thanks :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 7:42pm

Acie Anderson

This is insanely good :) Excellent job!

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 9:12pm

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thanks :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 7:35pm

5Forever23His10Fan

I think this is an excellent poem... There is so much truth this poem and also I think that is a good way to say it... it is in a sense bringing your own death sooner than what it ought to be... great way to look at it... very clever and interesting :)

Fri, February 24th, 2012 5:42am

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thanks :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 9:52pm

Atmosphere

I really like the title ;)

This poem was really well-written. It makes loads of sense too.

Sat, February 25th, 2012 8:13pm

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thanks :)

Sat, February 25th, 2012 7:24pm

Kyoko96

This poem is so powerful and truthful...The last line was amazing.. :D Keep it up Blackstar. :D

Sun, February 26th, 2012 5:00pm

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thanks :)

Sun, February 26th, 2012 11:58pm

Scrawls and Doodles

wow. the last line reveals itself like >bam!<
a powerful, touching piece. i like how you start it off and give it a fitting end.

Sun, March 4th, 2012 2:00pm

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thanks :)

Sun, March 4th, 2012 2:47pm

Bridge

really powerful for being so short. nice!

Wed, March 7th, 2012 3:25am

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thanks !!!

Tue, March 6th, 2012 8:09pm

Ghonesis

Great ending. Liked. =)

Wed, March 7th, 2012 6:44am

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thanks :)

Tue, March 6th, 2012 10:49pm

infiniteloveforyou

ouch! yeah you're right we cannot force one person to love us back that's the hurting lines i ever realize in my whole life oh believe me I'm insane (smile) NO.'' joke

(smile smile smile ):)
take care

Thu, March 8th, 2012 3:50am

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you're happy .. but alone :) thanks for the reading

Fri, March 9th, 2012 12:33am

Author in Progress

That was so true. I think emotional pain hurts more than physical pain. It was kinda short but to the point. Well done :)
~If u have a minute, please stop by and check out my romance novel set in the 1940's called Life Happens, and please let me know what u think! Thanks either way :)

~Katie

Wed, March 14th, 2012 2:20pm

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yes i will check your novel .. and thanks for the reading !

Wed, March 14th, 2012 4:30pm

Miss Trevize

Ah! Metaphorical death is sometimes...no, scratch that, it isn't. Metaphorical death is not as bad. Especially when you are young. Look to the future, love yourself, and be happy.

Wed, March 14th, 2012 3:45pm

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haha thanks ! for the advice and also for the reading !:)

Wed, March 14th, 2012 4:32pm

Aleisha Cree

cool :)

Sat, March 17th, 2012 5:39pm

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:)

Sat, March 17th, 2012 10:25pm

Areen Abukishek

love it

Sun, March 18th, 2012 11:46am

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:) thanks

Sun, March 18th, 2012 5:04am

Nichola Palermo

I love it go girl go

Tue, March 20th, 2012 9:59am

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thank you so much girl !!

Tue, March 20th, 2012 3:14am

cutie309

Wow i love it haha, its so true haha i love the bottom part though :D KMU when you post something new. Also, if you have the time can you check out my newest chapter of 'The Runaway'. If you do get the time to check it out, can you please leave an honest comment hahaha i really want to know what people think of it. But anyway, this is just awesome!!

Wed, March 21st, 2012 4:43am

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thanks

Tue, March 20th, 2012 11:38pm

KC Takes Flight

that's true:)

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 9:51pm

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:)

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 11:14pm

EmptyStarGazer

Like the others, it's sadly true. And the I do love the last time because that made my heart ache - it's soooo trueee! :( XX

Sat, March 24th, 2012 12:37pm

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thanks :)

Sat, March 24th, 2012 4:54pm

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