Fear: My Nightmare
Poem by: blackstar07
Fear is my weakness, also yours.
To be honest, I fear death.
But I want to fight all my fear.
I wanna see what death is.
I want to see his face.
I want to talk to you, death!
I want to know you more.
Oh, I fear of death.
I can’t deny it.
I fear you!
Fear, save me
I need to overcome you.
For fear is only in our mind.
And only caused by ourselves
For I fear my own self.
I need to overcome myself.
I need to save myself.
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I agree with Ilene Dawn. Only a very few people out there mostly if not fully overcomes there fear of stuff. But I believe they can, since I overcame my fear of spiders and snakes and now love them. :D
Keep me updated. c:
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thanks :DD very much
Fear is a natural reaction to something that could hurt you or do bad to you.
But fears are there to be overcome...
Very true poem, nice work. =)
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hahah very thank you .. friend :)
Truthful poem...Hopefully i can get to overcome all of my fears some day...:)
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.. yeah .. fear is only in our mind but We fear not inevitable :DD
I love it very great work.
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:DD thanks .. DD
Great poem, and true. Fear is not easily overcome, as one struggles overcoming yourself. You can be your worst enemy sometimes. This is the time that one must know truths. Fear can't exist when you know there is nothing to fear, your taken care of ^^
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hahah true .. thanks :)
yeah2x!! naks ..galing2x.. kahit di na ako mag-comment.. actual na ako nagcomment dito.. personal yon.. san ka pa xD
NICE POEM. . :)
this is very deep, and oh so true. Fear is just a mindframe. I like this very much.
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thanks for reading :)
this is awesome ! it is so deep!
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thanks :)
awsom
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:)
I'm usually not very good at reading and comprehending poems, but this one definitely spoke to me. loved it!!!
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thanks :)
This was beautifully written. As we all do have our own fears, and some we overcome, some we don't. I'm going to be honest, I think my biggest fear is my own mind, if that makes sense. To me, death can't be prevented, so there's no point in fearing, and also the fact I've lost like 6 close people. but that's just my thought. Like I said, beautifully written (: ~Kaitlynn.
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thanks very much :)
Sometimes the fear of death is only due to the unsureness hidden behind it.
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ahh haha correct ! :) thanks
I agree with John. In fact I believe almost all fears are seeded in uncertainty. People naturally shy away from what they dont know or understand.
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ohh thanks :)very much
nice =] reminds me of a quote i heard last year:
"Fear is a reflex, Confidence is a choice" =D
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thanks :)
Beautiful.
That is the only way I can describe this work from you.
Miki xx
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:)
0_0 Astounding. One minute you're saying fear is your weakness, the other you ask it to save you. Eerie in a sense... yet so real. :D
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:0
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i like it, i think everybody at least wants to overcome some of their fears
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yeah your right thank you so much friend :}