Fear is my weakness, also yours.
To be honest, I fear death.
But I want to fight all my fear.
I wanna see what death is.
I want to see his face.
I want to talk to you, death!
I want to know you more.
Oh, I fear of death.
I can’t deny it.
I fear you!
Fear, save me
I need to overcome you.
For fear is only in our mind.
And only caused by ourselves
For I fear my own self.
I need to overcome myself.
I need to save myself.
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Submitted: January 15, 2012
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Fear is a natural reaction to something that could hurt you or do bad to you.
But fears are there to be overcome...
Very true poem, nice work. =)
Truthful poem...Hopefully i can get to overcome all of my fears some day...:)
Tue, January 24th, 2012 7:16pmI love it very great work.
Tue, January 24th, 2012 8:58pmGreat poem, and true. Fear is not easily overcome, as one struggles overcoming yourself. You can be your worst enemy sometimes. This is the time that one must know truths. Fear can't exist when you know there is nothing to fear, your taken care of ^^
Wed, January 25th, 2012 8:26pmyeah2x!! naks ..galing2x.. kahit di na ako mag-comment.. actual na ako nagcomment dito.. personal yon.. san ka pa xD
NICE POEM. . :)
this is very deep, and oh so true. Fear is just a mindframe. I like this very much.
Thu, March 1st, 2012 11:44pmthis is awesome ! it is so deep!
Wed, March 14th, 2012 4:06pmawsom
Sun, March 18th, 2012 11:47amI'm usually not very good at reading and comprehending poems, but this one definitely spoke to me. loved it!!!
Sun, March 25th, 2012 12:45amThis was beautifully written. As we all do have our own fears, and some we overcome, some we don't. I'm going to be honest, I think my biggest fear is my own mind, if that makes sense. To me, death can't be prevented, so there's no point in fearing, and also the fact I've lost like 6 close people. but that's just my thought. Like I said, beautifully written (: ~Kaitlynn.
Sun, March 25th, 2012 1:01amSometimes the fear of death is only due to the unsureness hidden behind it.
Mon, March 26th, 2012 6:08amI agree with John. In fact I believe almost all fears are seeded in uncertainty. People naturally shy away from what they dont know or understand.
Thu, March 29th, 2012 3:19amnice =] reminds me of a quote i heard last year:
"Fear is a reflex, Confidence is a choice" =D
Beautiful.
That is the only way I can describe this work from you.
Miki xx
0_0 Astounding. One minute you're saying fear is your weakness, the other you ask it to save you. Eerie in a sense... yet so real. :D
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I agree with Ilene Dawn. Only a very few people out there mostly if not fully overcomes there fear of stuff. But I believe they can, since I overcame my fear of spiders and snakes and now love them. :D
Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:09pmKeep me updated. c:
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thanks :DD very much
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