Fear: My Nightmare

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Fear is only in our minds. We have to learn how to overcome it, especially the fear of death.

Fear is my weakness, also yours.

 

To be honest, I fear death.

 

But I want to fight all my fear.

 

I wanna see what death is.

 

I want to see his face.

 

I want to talk to you, death!

 

I want to know you more.

 

Oh, I fear of death.

 

I can’t deny it.

 

I fear you!

 

Fear, save me

 

I need to overcome you.

 

For fear is only in our mind.

 

And only caused by ourselves

 

For I fear my own self.

 

I need to overcome myself.

 

I need to save myself.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Submitted: January 15, 2012

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Matthew Brazwell

I agree with Ilene Dawn. Only a very few people out there mostly if not fully overcomes there fear of stuff. But I believe they can, since I overcame my fear of spiders and snakes and now love them. :D
Keep me updated. c:

Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:09pm

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thanks :DD very much

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:46pm

Ghonesis

Fear is a natural reaction to something that could hurt you or do bad to you.
But fears are there to be overcome...
Very true poem, nice work. =)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:48pm

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hahah very thank you .. friend :)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:52pm

Kyoko96

Truthful poem...Hopefully i can get to overcome all of my fears some day...:)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 7:16pm

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.. yeah .. fear is only in our mind but We fear not inevitable :DD

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:59pm

Nigth and Day

I love it very great work.

Tue, January 24th, 2012 8:58pm

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:DD thanks .. DD

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:47pm

Yume chan

Great poem, and true. Fear is not easily overcome, as one struggles overcoming yourself. You can be your worst enemy sometimes. This is the time that one must know truths. Fear can't exist when you know there is nothing to fear, your taken care of ^^

Wed, January 25th, 2012 8:26pm

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hahah true .. thanks :)

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:37pm

SmileValentine

yeah2x!! naks ..galing2x.. kahit di na ako mag-comment.. actual na ako nagcomment dito.. personal yon.. san ka pa xD
NICE POEM. . :)

Wed, February 8th, 2012 1:21pm

AshenhartKrie

this is very deep, and oh so true. Fear is just a mindframe. I like this very much.

Thu, March 1st, 2012 11:44pm

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thanks for reading :)

Thu, March 1st, 2012 3:46pm

COOKIES1

this is awesome ! it is so deep!

Wed, March 14th, 2012 4:06pm

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thanks :)

Wed, March 14th, 2012 4:39pm

Areen Abukishek

awsom

Sun, March 18th, 2012 11:47am

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:)

Sun, March 18th, 2012 5:06am

mia1535

I'm usually not very good at reading and comprehending poems, but this one definitely spoke to me. loved it!!!

Sun, March 25th, 2012 12:45am

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thanks :)

Sat, March 24th, 2012 6:07pm

desjane1

This was beautifully written. As we all do have our own fears, and some we overcome, some we don't. I'm going to be honest, I think my biggest fear is my own mind, if that makes sense. To me, death can't be prevented, so there's no point in fearing, and also the fact I've lost like 6 close people. but that's just my thought. Like I said, beautifully written (: ~Kaitlynn.

Sun, March 25th, 2012 1:01am

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thanks very much :)

Sat, March 24th, 2012 6:09pm

John Xu

Sometimes the fear of death is only due to the unsureness hidden behind it.

Mon, March 26th, 2012 6:08am

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ahh haha correct ! :) thanks

Mon, March 26th, 2012 1:26am

Shadow Fang

I agree with John. In fact I believe almost all fears are seeded in uncertainty. People naturally shy away from what they dont know or understand.

Thu, March 29th, 2012 3:19am

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ohh thanks :)very much

Wed, March 28th, 2012 8:24pm

RiotSkullkid

nice =] reminds me of a quote i heard last year:
"Fear is a reflex, Confidence is a choice" =D

Wed, April 25th, 2012 1:13pm

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thanks :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 4:42pm

Mikeru

Beautiful.
That is the only way I can describe this work from you.
Miki xx

Mon, May 7th, 2012 1:35am

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:)

Mon, May 7th, 2012 1:19am

Cynicrylle

0_0 Astounding. One minute you're saying fear is your weakness, the other you ask it to save you. Eerie in a sense... yet so real. :D

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 9:36am

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:0

Fri, January 11th, 2013 2:36pm

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