Girl in the Mirror: My Reflection

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

When will my reflection show, who I am inside ??

Every time I look at my mirror,

 

I saw her crying.

 

I saw her laughing.

 

I heard her screams.

 

I can feel what she feels.

 

Now, I’m alone, screaming, but no one hears me.

 

I laugh, but everyone thinks I’m crazy.

 

I cry, but they are just looking at me.

 

I felt the coldness around.

 

By looking at the girl in the mirror.

 

 

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Submitted: January 15, 2012

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Scrawls and Doodles

Amazingly done!!

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 11:11am

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thank you :)....

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 4:22pm

Matthew Brazwell

I agree with the others, it was amazimg. :D
If I felt all cold all the time looking at myself in the mirror I would think bloody mary is there. :o (JK)
Well Keep Me Updated. c:

Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:12pm

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.. hahah really .. bloody mary .. :DD thanks so much again ..

Tue, January 24th, 2012 4:05pm

Paulsleen

This is very good. I especially like the last couple lines :)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:39pm

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:) that's me the girl in the mirror :DD .. thank you very muchhhhhh...:DD

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:50pm

AshleyRose

A short poem but full of meaning. Good job :)

Wed, January 25th, 2012 6:11am

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thanks ....>>>>>>> :DD

Tue, January 24th, 2012 11:08pm

Aleauea

Love this! Off to read the rest :)

Wed, January 25th, 2012 10:47am

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thanks :))

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:33pm

Alisindra

Very very nice poem. I liked it very much. Its so true in so many ways.

Wed, January 25th, 2012 5:56pm

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:)

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:35pm

Slyton Roar

Its good ...Great way to express the meaning of the poem

Wed, January 25th, 2012 8:27pm

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:) :DD

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:37pm

Irini Caprell

:) good one

Thu, January 26th, 2012 6:20pm

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:DD

Thu, January 26th, 2012 8:49pm

Kyoko96

Great poem, so full of meaning..:)

Fri, January 27th, 2012 1:42am

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:DD

Thu, January 26th, 2012 8:46pm

Christian Taylor

This is BY FAR one of the best poems I've read today! This was beautifully written and I could just feel the emotions that your expressing in this poem! Excellent work!

- Christian

Sat, January 28th, 2012 12:46am

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thanks .. :DD friend

Fri, January 27th, 2012 4:53pm

bobthebuilder

Great poem. You put your thoughts on the page so well, the emotion is so real. Well done.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:19pm

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:DD

Sat, January 28th, 2012 6:25pm

meriddle

It's nice. I liked the 'cause and effect' at the end.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 5:39pm

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thank you :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 6:26pm

memoryblue

I really like this! so simple and yet so deep and thought provoking. great job!

Sun, February 5th, 2012 1:31pm

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thanks :)

Mon, February 6th, 2012 12:25am

GuiltyPleasure

when i was a teen, i used to feel like this too. very relatable :)

Thu, February 16th, 2012 4:42pm

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thanks.. friend :)

Thu, February 16th, 2012 3:01pm

infiniteloveforyou

i think my dark side is the one who creates my pain ' but it's ordinary to fell like this EVERYBODY HURTS right''



godbless and take care

Thu, March 8th, 2012 3:57am

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.. thanks to your advice and .. thanks for the reading:)

Fri, March 9th, 2012 12:22am

Areen Abukishek

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 10:24am

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:)

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 11:14pm

fakesubmite

I remember feeling like that it sucked but it made me better.

Mon, March 26th, 2012 12:17am

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:)

Sun, March 25th, 2012 5:18pm

Whispers in the rain

Very good work...

Sat, March 31st, 2012 8:52am

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thanks :)

Sat, March 31st, 2012 2:13am

Jan Gabriel

There's some confusion with the verb tenses, but looking beyond the technicalities I think the poem is nice. I can imagine it fitting well with a short film sequence. :)

Sat, April 28th, 2012 4:27am

Mikeru

Quite the self-evaluation.
I can't quite comment on this in a personal way, since I try to steer-clear of mirrors, but it is very in-depth.

Mon, May 7th, 2012 1:33am

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