I miss you so much :(

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

love not only your self also others who love you

I Can’t Forget You

He’s everything to me

A lot of promises for a better future

He saves me from the dark

One smile from him is good enough to complet my day

I thought you’ll never leave me

But this time I’m all alone

A life time lost I wish I could turn back the time


Submitted: February 23, 2012

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5Forever23His10Fan

This is a very nice poem and says a lot... I think everyone has a person that either will or has make them feel this way... great job though and best of luck :)

Fri, February 24th, 2012 5:27am

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thanks very much :)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 9:53pm

splendourfalls

I think this is awesone. Great job, deserves everyones attention.....lovely piece of work..........great job!

Fri, February 24th, 2012 9:34am

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thanks :)

Fri, February 24th, 2012 8:30pm

Kyoko96

Great job...It's really lovely and sweet. :D

Sun, February 26th, 2012 5:01pm

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:DD

Mon, February 27th, 2012 12:10am

Matthew Brazwell

This is a lovely poem. The only erroe I seen was that you misspelled the word complete (you put complet). I like the poem and hope to read more of yours soon. good luck. c:

Tue, February 28th, 2012 6:40pm

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haha yeah thats the error i see . :) thank you correcting my mistake

Tue, February 28th, 2012 3:25pm

Matthew Brazwell

error*...xD

Tue, February 28th, 2012 6:40pm

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