Lie >3:(

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

you said you doesn't love him but is that true ?? ...

Lie

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Your love is the greatest lie

In the world of lie happiness cant find

Tears are falling on my window

I'm waiting for you

You said you loved me but you take it away

I wished nothing for you

I hate you

Believe me

But it's a lie >3


Submitted: March 29, 2012

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Christian Taylor

Beautiful! Excellent work!

Thu, March 29th, 2012 10:32am

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thanks very much friend :)

Thu, March 29th, 2012 7:49pm

Wu Lang

this piece is awesome! you are so good to write what you really feel...deep and strong feelings .

Fri, March 30th, 2012 6:29am

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thanks :)

Thu, March 29th, 2012 11:39pm

whiteroses

this is really good!
truly relatable!! xoxo

Fri, March 30th, 2012 6:30am

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thanks :)

Thu, March 29th, 2012 11:38pm

Princess21

Nice work..... the beginning and end is excellent.

Fri, March 30th, 2012 7:05am

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thanks :)

Fri, March 30th, 2012 12:11am

fakesubmite

This is what I felt like when an old love left me after years past it still hurts.
Great work on this you understand emotions and that's a wonderful gift.

Sat, March 31st, 2012 11:34am

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thanks for the reading friend :)

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 12:09am

SmileValentine

wow.. is that amy lee?? haha,, nice one!!
galing mu tuks XD

Sun, April 1st, 2012 4:42am

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Tue, April 3rd, 2012 12:27am

Amzor89

Wow, simply beautiful. Well done my friend. Keep up the great work xx

Sun, April 1st, 2012 6:44am

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thank you friend :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:59pm

Areen Abukishek

wow
such a nice poem

Sun, April 1st, 2012 9:59am

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thank you friend :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:53pm

Sammy Wang Yang

Short and impactful.

Sun, April 1st, 2012 12:16pm

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thank you friend :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:50pm

everlastinglove

a great poem :) xxx

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 9:07am

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thank you friend :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:48pm

MyVintageFairytale

Your writing is so powerful and inspirational :)


MyVintageFairytale

Wed, April 4th, 2012 8:23pm

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thanks :P

Fri, April 6th, 2012 1:44am

ashi17

Very strong expressions..............good work !

Sun, April 8th, 2012 10:26am

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thanks :P

Sun, April 8th, 2012 5:00am

Lywren Bellisario

VERY inspirational... I love it! The structure of your poetry is moving in a subtle but personal way. -L.B. P.S...fan for fan :)

Wed, April 11th, 2012 10:06pm

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:P thanks

Wed, April 11th, 2012 5:01pm

Ellen Michelle

Wow, I like it :)Well done you.
Please could you return the read :D

Sat, May 19th, 2012 8:25pm

kasandra louise henry

THIS IS GORGEOUSE MY FRIEND!!! i really love your skill of words!

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 12:27pm

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thanks

Wed, July 4th, 2012 2:46am

InkSplodges

Another great poem! Keep it up :D

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 4:47pm

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thanks

Wed, July 4th, 2012 2:44am

blackheartroza

A very good poem...lol and i usually dont like poems but i Love this one :) very very good

Thu, November 29th, 2012 1:12pm

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