Sky, I Want to Know More About You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wonder why sky is so vast :)

I want to reach you, sky.

 

I want to know who creates you.

 

I want to know if you’re true

 

 

I want to touch you but I can’t

 

I want to know about the mysteries about you

 

I want to know why you’re color suddenly change into black.

 

I want to know why? Are you sad?

 

I want to know,

 

Please answer me.

 

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Submitted: January 15, 2012

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Scrawls and Doodles

This is so sweet :-) And i simply adore the title, its captivating, yet cute at the same time :-)

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 11:15am

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wow.....thank you so much friend:)

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 4:23pm

Matthew Brazwell

Haha I agree with soulcnadygal, this is a sweet poem and title. Keep me updated. c:

Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:10pm

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haha sweet... thank you .. :DD

Tue, January 24th, 2012 4:02pm

Paulsleen

Haha this was interesting :) But yeah, it does make you wonder...*looks up* but I find the sky beautiful anyhow. Nice poem :)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:37pm

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.. thank you ... so much

Tue, January 24th, 2012 4:03pm

Ghonesis

The sky is one of the many mysteries in life.
Great work. =)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:50pm

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yeah still i want to know about the mystery of the sky .. thanks for reading :DD

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:49pm

Kyoko96

Awesome work...it makes me also wonder about the sky...:)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 5:42pm

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hahah thanks :)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 4:02pm

bobthebuilder

Reminds me of my kid when he was younger, always asking questions. I liked it.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:21pm

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yeah .. :DD

Sat, January 28th, 2012 6:26pm

DLCannon Reprise

I'd like to know where the sky comes from. It always seemed like a far away lost forgotten place that can't be remembered, but only push what little piece of memory I have of it into a deeper stage of memory blockage about what i could of sworn used to be in the sky seen by thee eyes of me.....

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 11:53pm

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haha thank you for the reading .. i love your comment :)

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 5:09pm

Nichola Palermo

The sky is beautiful and yet how many times we stop and look at it? Good work I love your poem.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:54pm

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thanks :)

Tue, March 20th, 2012 11:36pm

ShadowsOfPoetry

I like the title- I think maybe it could use more details and texture.Maybe even reading facts about the sky and then mixing it with your thoughts and imagery- I don't know, just an idea.

Wed, March 28th, 2012 8:22am

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ok. ok :) thanks

Wed, March 28th, 2012 2:39am

Areen Abukishek

it is so natural , i love it

Sun, December 9th, 2012 9:23am

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thanks

Mon, December 10th, 2012 1:28am

justinjay

Yeah I want to be up there too. Actually I wrote a song about the same thing but your poem expressed it more. Good job!

Fri, January 11th, 2013 5:34pm

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thanks friend :)

Fri, January 11th, 2013 2:10pm

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