Sweetness of Bitterness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Bitterness doesn't mean 'bitter'. Turn it around, you'll be finding the 'sweetness'.

Sweetness of Bitterness

When there’s a loser, there’s a winner.

When there’s a tear of sadness, there’s a tear of joy.

When there is war, peace will come.

When there’s hatred, there’s the love behind.

When there’s a tear, there’s laughter.

When rain falls, sun will shine.

So when I’m gone, there will be you.

Bitter is not always bitter.

Bitter someday will become better.

Remember: When there’s bitterness, there’s sweetness.

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Submitted: January 14, 2012

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Blackmirror

I like it! I love how you list all the good from the bad. Nice job! :)

Sat, January 14th, 2012 3:26pm

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thanks.... actually that's only my work that my teacher asked me to do =)

Sat, January 14th, 2012 3:04pm

Kyoko96

wow, wow , WOW....I just love the way how listed the good things that will come out from the bad....Amazing...

Sat, January 14th, 2012 8:41pm

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=)

Sat, January 14th, 2012 3:01pm

Aleauea

Loved it! As always XD

Sun, January 15th, 2012 9:40am

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thanks=)

Sun, January 15th, 2012 2:22pm

haunt sorrow

I love it. How you seperated the bad from the good. When you said bitterness comes with sweetness was true. Also, it's well wriiten and beautiful.

Sat, January 21st, 2012 1:41am

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Thanks very much :DD

Fri, January 20th, 2012 5:58pm

Victor Darnell Hadnot

This has got to be one of the better poems I've read here on Booksie. Love how you arranged it. Nicely done.

Sat, January 21st, 2012 2:55am

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thanks very much :DD

Sat, January 21st, 2012 1:09am

Matthew Brazwell

Nicely written. Like everyone else, I loved how you did the good's coming from the bad. I hope to read more of your writing. so keep me updated. :D

Tue, January 24th, 2012 12:06pm

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ok ... thank you ... :)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 3:54pm

Ghonesis

This got me thinking...
And I love how simple but true this poem is. Great work. =O

Wed, January 25th, 2012 3:42pm

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:DD

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:34pm

every now and then

Hi yes great poem! it works for me cos you have kept in simple

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:49pm

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thanks my friend :DD

Wed, January 25th, 2012 4:35pm

Maya23

you're talented...really like your writings!

Sat, February 4th, 2012 8:16am

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:) thanks ..

Sun, February 5th, 2012 1:46am

SmileValentine

namo!! astig ka.. hahahaha..
galing2x.. clap2x XD

Wed, February 8th, 2012 1:11pm

Matthew D. Hay (Tangible Word)

Loved the poem! Amazing. :D
-TW

Wed, March 7th, 2012 2:34am

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:) thnks

Tue, March 6th, 2012 8:10pm

Ebony Alexis

my favorite!

Wed, March 14th, 2012 11:36am

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thanks very much :)

Wed, March 14th, 2012 4:28pm

Jan Gabriel

It rings like an inspirational poster. I especially liked the line "Bitter is not always bitter", which really sort of sums up the whole thought of the piece. Nice job! :)

Sat, April 28th, 2012 5:11pm

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thanks

Sun, April 29th, 2012 1:16am

Mikeru

Honestly, you should work for a valentine card company or something!
Absolutely brilliant.
Miki xx

Mon, May 7th, 2012 1:37am

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thanks i will read some of yours soon :)

Mon, May 7th, 2012 1:18am

Lisa Ayers

Hi blackstar07, I read on here daily and came a across you :)

This is absolutely wonderful. What I enjoyed about it was its simplicity.

Well done

Tue, February 5th, 2013 10:09am

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tnx so much :DDD

Thu, February 7th, 2013 1:21am

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