Decaying Roses

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I'm going to add more...someday hopefully

Decaying roses fall unto the cold marble floor

As she run away from her fears

 And out the grand double door

Unwilling to hear

The truth that will shatter her heart

Making everything she loved disappear

All her pictures of timeless art

Now watch her flee with a heartless sneer

Attached to their exquisite faces

Submitted: October 01, 2009

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any suggestions to do next cuz im kinda stuck with this one...?

Thu, October 1st, 2009 2:06pm


Good poem. I would changed "unto" to "onto" and "run" to "ran". Otherwise good.

Fri, October 9th, 2009 7:51pm

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